Lol...face slapping
There is no way a father will be 32 and the son 32 as well unless he is not his biological father
He remembered how this morning, for the first time in thirty-two years, he had an argument with his son because of a girl and tonight he saw him almost kill a bastard because of the same girl. The king knew in his mind that he used the crown as an excuse to keep his son safe and away from the Pyxis but his heart knew better.
Olivia Sparks
Urban · filledelisle
how?
He remembered how this morning, for the first time in thirty-two years, he had an argument with his son because of a girl and tonight he saw him almost kill a bastard because of the same girl. The king knew in his mind that he used the crown as an excuse to keep his son safe and away from the Pyxis but his heart knew better.
Olivia Sparks
Urban · filledelisle
Removed how?
Already locking the story in Chapter 7 aby 8>> too bad...delete...delete....
It hardly happens in real life
If the king is 32, so how old is Maxen..
He remembered how this morning, for the first time in thirty-two years, he had an argument with his son because of a girl and tonight he saw him almost kill a bastard because of the same girl. The king knew in his mind that he used the crown as an excuse to keep his son safe and away from the Pyxis but his heart knew better.
Olivia Sparks
Urban · filledelisle
make sure Maxen doesn't hear you calling her cursed...otherwise you will be a dead man...
"I heard about a girl…" Secretary Abbott said as he pivoted on his heel to face the buffoon before him. First, Jack turned off the elevator cameras. Next, he didn't track his highness's use of personal lines. And last, which is the worst of them all, he let Maxen meet that cursed woman.
Olivia Sparks
Urban · filledelisle
Wow, such a nice story. .
ok...I understand now
He remembered how this morning, for the first time in thirty-two years, he had an argument with his son because of a girl and tonight he saw him almost kill a bastard because of the same girl. The king knew in his mind that he used the crown as an excuse to keep his son safe and away from the Pyxis but his heart knew better.
Olivia Sparks
Urban · filledelisle