Ash4vaR

Ash4vaR

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2019-10-13 Se unió Global
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Ash4vaR
Ash4vaR
1 months ago
Replied to OuroBoros_

any idea where the original one was posted?

Ash4vaR
Ash4vaR
7 months ago
Commented

plz stick with either Sherry or crystal...

Ash4vaR
Ash4vaR
7 months ago
Replied to HideousGrain

Is there some translation setting in the app? bcz I am still seeing the same thing... Couldn't take snapshot to show it to u

The moment she took her first step into the room, everyone made their move. The War Priestess, the Chieftain, and the other powerhouses appeared around the unknown woman in an instant, circling her. They didn't know what the woman was planning to do, but everyone could sense that she was dangerous. She didn't belong to the group of human powerhouses who'd come to the ancient city, and nobody knew her. 

Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!

Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!

Fantasy · HideousGrain

Ash4vaR
Ash4vaR
7 months ago
Posted

The whole thing sounds like a Chinese novel. is this translated? Chinese name?

Este libro ha sido eliminado.
Ash4vaR
Ash4vaR
7 months ago
Commented

were stronger...?

Ash4vaR
Ash4vaR
7 months ago
Commented

instead of "nobody realised her", could it be "nobody recognised her"?

The moment she took her first step into the room, everyone made their move. The War Priestess, the Chieftain, and the other powerhouses appeared around the unknown woman in an instant, circling her. They didn't know what the woman was planning to do, but everyone could sense that she was dangerous. She didn't belong to the group of human powerhouses who'd come to the ancient city, and nobody knew her. 

Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!

Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!

Fantasy · HideousGrain

Ash4vaR
Ash4vaR
7 months ago
Replied to Slushy_Apollo

maybe the assessment part was what he was thinking about... to keep his strength hidden maybe?

"If you want to acquire one, then you obviously need to become an adventurer, to do that, you need to take an assessment to see if you can become one and what your rank would be." When she finished, Gideon thought about it and didn't see why not, and do he nodded.

RISE OF THE POISON MASTER

RISE OF THE POISON MASTER

Fantasy · Bj_Omonobi_4986

Ash4vaR
Ash4vaR
7 months ago
Commented

"devour them* later"... ?

Gideon then stored the bodies of the tiger and the extraordinary beasts inside his inventory so that Lisk could devour the later as beasts grew stronger by eating each other.

RISE OF THE POISON MASTER

RISE OF THE POISON MASTER

Fantasy · Bj_Omonobi_4986

Ash4vaR
Ash4vaR
7 months ago
Commented

"upon" instead of "A upon"

"FIRE!" A upon hearing the command, hundreds of ranged spells were conjured and fire at the rare level beasts.

RISE OF THE POISON MASTER

RISE OF THE POISON MASTER

Fantasy · Bj_Omonobi_4986

Ash4vaR
Ash4vaR
8 months ago
Commented

heart felt* much lighter...

His heart felt much lighter than ever. Finally, he didn't have to worry about his secret anymore.

Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!

Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!

Fantasy · HideousGrain