Daoist626662

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Daoist626662
Daoist626662
3 months ago
Posted

bro some chapters are missing is it on purposs or what

Daoist626662
Daoist626662
4 months ago
Replied to BlackNilton

hope you get better man thats rough

Daoist626662
Daoist626662
6 months ago
Replied to readerbecamewriter

naruto is probably less determined so he wouldn't atract her, sakura said naruto is stupid and obnoxios because he didn't have any parents to teach him right and wrong

Sakura joined in, comparing Horyu to other Uchiha members and belittling his abilities. Horyu was hurt by their words and felt embarrassed. He couldn't understand why they were treating him this way.

Gamer System in Uchiha World[Completed]

Gamer System in Uchiha World[Completed]

Anime & Comics · TheFanficGod

Daoist626662
Daoist626662
7 months ago
Commented

more like 8.33 if you use percentages

Tom scribbled on the ground for a while and said quietly to the eagle at the door, "Nine minutes."

Drawing cards at Hogwarts

Drawing cards at Hogwarts

Book&Literature · inferno303

Daoist626662
Daoist626662
7 months ago
Commented

first of all, how did a sheep lead a lion army, no normal sheep can do it, and if the sheep is ordinary the moment a lion is hungry it would eat it, the lions then woul fight for the alpha spot, then it would be an army of lions led by a lion

"I am not afraid of an army of lions led by a sheep; I am afraid of an army of sheep led by a lion." ~Alexander the Great

COTE: L Lawliet In The Classroom Of The Elite

COTE: L Lawliet In The Classroom Of The Elite

Anime & Comics · MilkywayAndromeda

Daoist626662
Daoist626662
1 years ago
Posted

you aint getting no 5 stars with that updating scedule. story good thought...................................................................

Daoist626662
Daoist626662
3 years ago
Replied to Daoist626662

i meant early stage A.I

Daoist626662
Daoist626662
3 years ago
Replied to Daoist626662

so i reread most of the chapters, there was alot of improvement, espetially with making some things clear, i don't know if this is intentianal but there are alot of times were things are vaige, and i hope it wouldn't be all answered with one big information dump as alot of stories with that problem become too boring as the answer wouldn't be as effective, some stories link it all with a short explenation that leads to another mystory, and the answer to it would solve the puzzle, and that would be a good way to go about it, but a unique way to lead the story forward would also be good, but for both ways to work the story has to be attractive all the way throught, another thing is that that when a mission is issued such as in the beginning of the story with the tutorials, it repeats alot of thing which makes it sound like an early state A.I , i don't know if its only in some chapters or if its intentional, i hope there is an exeplenation for it. note: thank you for the update and the fix, it helped alot

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Daoist626662
Daoist626662
3 years ago
Replied to CephasWRITES

can you tell me how long it will take you

Daoist626662
Daoist626662
3 years ago
Replied to Daoist626662

note: most advansed in the country not the world

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The World Flipped

The World Flipped

Fantasy · CephasWRITES