we will see 😁
ch 0 3 Chapitre 3 : Survivor (2)
Anime & Comics · Ersmers
insane !!!
I also found that it lacks a sense of danger. That is to say that the danger is present, explained, and understandable but only for the characters. The characters live in a supernatural world and it's conscious of things. But we were aware of nothing! We do not see the danger, we are not shown it. I will take the example of the attack on the father of Isaac. I would have preferred to see the father get killed because it would have been more impactful. Basically, its lack of action represents the level of strength of all the characters to get an idea of the danger.
ch 25 CHPT 24: Scream of the Future.....
TV · _Avatar0FFury_
thanks for the chapter
I give you real advice on how to improve your story and learn to appreciate MC more because for me MC is bland. The only thing that can make him interesting is the body's past that he has. Realize that your character has no development and what will he bring in the life of vampires? Now I give you some advice that for me can really improve your MC and your story: When the MC reincarnates in the body of the werewolf because the original guy dies and he kills all the villagers and he stays in the village leaves guilt and tries to forgive itself in their grave but staying in the same place, where the remorse started for years does not destroy its guilt all at once. So if we had to explain to us why he remains at the scene of the crime !! Is it a self-inflicted punishment etc. It adds depth to the MC. The idea of the nearby village helping her get back to life is a good idea, but not enough use. The MC comes from the modern age and reincarnates into the modern age and in a supernatural village. Normally such a village must have a custom, a tradition which can help the MC to let go of his guilt and which really attaches him to the village to the point of entering into a war with a cannibal village. Now his wolf, as I understand his wolf, is the original werewolf. Now how is it that he manages to get it under control over time !!? It sucks you had a real free field to force him to accept his wolf side and be more savage and proud and with the village allow him to awaken spiritually and communicate with his wolf. Here I hope I gave you some new ideas for the continuation of your story.[img=recommend]
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TV · The_Crimson_Writer
thx for chapter !!!! I think it's cool that he's becoming more and more OP thanks to his own efforts, but I'm asking how are the fights going to be now? We all know that our enemies and the battles we all expect are against the blessed. Would it also be one-sided like with Long Chen? Because I would like the fights to be EPIC even if the blessed ones will not be as OP as the MC. Because it is necessary not to lie, a blessed one is always a hero of his generation. A hero who must make the MC EPIC. I hope I won't be disappointed !!!
ch 701 Chapter 696: Six Seeds
Eastern · KevinAscending
thx !!!
ch 41 Chapter 41- Preparation For The Workshop Battle
Anime & Comics · Heavenly_Raven
I find your idea very well that he does not have all the powers at once and that his comes little by little but if there is one thing that I do not understand and why does he have to go to the army to have the super soldier serum ?? If I understood correctly he has access to a library which gives him access to all the knowledge of the Universe offered by his Mother and that he is more intelligent or a faster understanding than the others and that he will inherit from the business the other con. So why, with all his tools at his disposal, must he go to the army to wage war, suffer to have a serum that he can create himself?
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pity oh great author !! Don't leave us with such a chapter !!! 😭😭😭😭
ch 40 Chapter 40- Farewell Part 2
Anime & Comics · Heavenly_Raven
thank
ch 38 Chapter 38- Powerful Combination
Anime & Comics · Heavenly_Raven
The chapters are too short !!!!
ch 31 Chapter 31- Shinsu Training
Anime & Comics · Heavenly_Raven
more! more! more! PLEASE !!!!!!
ch 28 Chapter 28- 20th Floor Test
Anime & Comics · Heavenly_Raven
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 594 Chapter 589: Recruit, Their Choices
Eastern · KevinAscending
Supernaturel
ch 251 Announcement <New Book(s)>
Anime & Comics · Draugzel
Write a comment if you want more! Because that's the only way for me to know you want more!!!
The Boys - Let Me Show You A True Hero!
Anime & Comics · Writing_Shirou