As there are only a few chapters, I can't really say, but so far good and interesting. The ability to control others through emotions is pretty good and refreshing idea.
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It has a really good flow and English vocabulary. It has a hooking feeling that makes reader's like to read more, but because there is only 3 chaps I can say only this. Put up the good work!
Quite a good book with an interesting Mc, Fml, and other characters. The writing quality while not perfect is better than the majority on this sight, but perhaps this is just my opinion. Story development definitely not fast but interesting as I can see a great picture growing in the background. Stability should be more than now, but we can only hope the author will increase updates. All in all, I recommend everyone to at least try it as I don't feel it is a waste of time at all.
Lord of the Karmic Fate
Fantasy · Gery_