What did he reply to?
"Yes, thank you," he replied, vigorously holding the young heroine's hand, a little thought in his mind. "How's your first day on the job?"
My Hormonal Control Quirk
Anime & Comics · Shinoerah
Next chapter when?
Nice chapter. Don’t get deterred by neg comments.
I agree with the idea except the last part. Making his seed taste good eill ruin the realism of the novel that come here for,
Development is good. No rush. The whole appeal of this story was “naturally” developing a relationship. Chemical manipulation destroys it. Just keep doing what you’re doing and don’t doubt yourself. Good job.
There was no useless content. Everything set the mood.
A shame it was dropped
Why would you want that? If you don't got s.th good to say, say nothing.
There was a lot more details that I didn't add. Especially in the part between my first performance and the decades after that. The young me was very passionate about my dreams and a LOT of things had to happen for me to finally put it down for good. Like how at one point, I seriously considered running away and cutting all ties with the ducal household, or when I realized how low my sister had fallen due to envy.
Fulfilling my Lustful Fantasies
Fantasy · Fnatic_Fan
Either say 'there was a lot more detail' or 'there were a lot more details'.
There was a lot more details that I didn't add. Especially in the part between my first performance and the decades after that. The young me was very passionate about my dreams and a LOT of things had to happen for me to finally put it down for good. Like how at one point, I seriously considered running away and cutting all ties with the ducal household, or when I realized how low my sister had fallen due to envy.
Fulfilling my Lustful Fantasies
Fantasy · Fnatic_Fan
Why would he do that?
A waiter approached them as soon as he sat down, and Qin Feng ordered his meal in broken Arabic, but unbeknownst to him, Keith knew very well that the man in front of him was fluent in this language.
Villain: The Play of Destiny
Fantasy · FateDevilAce