Reighlyyy

Max is the summum of the useless MC and don't talk about character development. You can not develop anything from a useless trash like him and call it "realistic character development". He's stupid, trash and utterly annoying. If you want a MC that's not Dumb don't read that. Not a smart MC, not a cunning MC but a MC that is not utterly stupid. I can't believe I put up with this novel. Because the writer is good otherwise and the world-building is nice you hope to see the MC get better but no, he stays a trash and reincarnating him was maybe the most wasteful act. A pure waste of ressources

Not horrible but some serious issues : first the writing quality, each sentence begin with eren this, eren that, eren do, eren think. Repeating the same name at the beginning of each sentence and writing that way makes it really hard to just keep going for your reader. Other problems too but they concern other categories. Mistakes when writing names, in words...Story development and world background : WAY too much info dumping, there are litteral wall of informations every 20 chapters to explain in one go a New system that's being introduced or how something works, or an invention : we don't need all the details, most of them we forget because used one time for one adventure and then never called again. Overpowered inventions that are common but not used at maximum capacity: why no one is asking the Mc about his ??? Competence when all teacher have access to it? The story has some good idea with the Butcher plot that was revealed with the sage but frankly, not invested. The MC is all about "being free and powerful and creating a good team" he's the carpet for every powerful person he meets, his team is useless, never developed, never here with him, he never tell them the truth, they're just here to say the MC has a team but that's the extent of their role. Character development : all of them are one dimensional : they can take 3 roads, useful to the Mc so they do everything to help him and love him and obey him without any question, hated by the Mc so they are bad people or useless to the Mc and they are not developed. I've read quite a bit of the story and honestly I can't care about any character. They don't make you feel attached, there is no depth in them, they are tools to the story if they die well too bad for them, if they live well too bad for you, you need to remember their name. Their are too many character but don't worry, the author tell you the chapter they were introduced in because you will need to go back there to read their Introduction because frankly they are forgettable . The wiki is of no use btw. The stats part, well, you don't remember them from one chapter to another, you don't understand how and why they progress, you don't feel how they influence the battle style of the MC and frankly you don't care. World background is messy, at best, I am at chapter 350 and have no idea about how the world works, the role of noble, How the law is applied, by whom is it made respected, what are the institutions etc... And the contracts that are just the author way of saying "it works like that and that's all" . The only things we have info about is the academy and it's functions are numerous, messy ,complicated and at the same time unorganized and without originality. We've all read other novel so if your academy has merit points, tournaments and Apprenticeship please don't try to make it seems original by over complicating things .

45, the last of the free chapters