Atreyu_Parks

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Atreyu_Parks
Atreyu_Parks
4 months ago
Commented

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[Thunder Dragon: [Upper] - A prime species of tooth dragon, reigning over the Flower and Stone Wasteland Oasis. Renowned for its formidable leaping prowess and nocturnal hunting. Lacking inherent strong electrical discharge, it gains enhanced electro-kinetic abilities through a symbiotic relationship with 'Lightning Bugs.' When the Thunder Dragon activates its electrical charge, these bugs evolve into 'Super Electric Lightning Bugs,' emitting a potent blue glow, while the dragon itself enters a 'super charged state,' significantly increasing its lethality.

Reborn As a Pirate

Reborn As a Pirate

Fantasy · Rqmk

Atreyu_Parks
Atreyu_Parks
2 years ago
Posted

locked the first chapter no point in reading.

Atreyu_Parks
Atreyu_Parks
3 years ago
Posted

I liked this story but It has a lot of issues the translation or writing quality aren't great and there are a lot of story inconsistencies and just lack of explanation for most everything and you can't even infer most of the information because it seems to be following dnd races/abilities but completely butchered without explanation like how the mc is a red dragon that has its flavour replaced with a blue dragon at the same time it uses some sort of OP power that is barely explained and made useless unless the mc is about to die leaving absolutely no suspense. characters are 1 dimensional and flat with no real character development which can be fine but I have an issue with the fact that the author seems to introduce a new side character that we know is going to die in the next 10 chapters and wastes time fleshing them out as well as breaking the flow of the story. the other side characters seem like they will be important at some point but aren't fleshed out enough to make us care about them or understand why they will be important later other than they hold a position and dont like dragons. over all this story seems like an extremely rough draft and I would like to see it be refined.

Atreyu_Parks
Atreyu_Parks
3 years ago
Commented

this chapter made me drop this story it just goes against what has already been established character traits and just feels out of place and illogical for both Aaron and ellena creating an inconsistency that ruined my experience of this story I was really enjoying until amber showed up it would have made so much more sense to drive her out of the story or at least out of the annoying position she is in she instantly establishes herself as a threat by her ability to detect lies Aaron wouldn't be dumb enough to keep her around if he actually wants to keep ellena safe I'm done with my rant do with it what you will

Atreyu_Parks
Atreyu_Parks
3 years ago
Replied to Piggy

like most translations that is probably just the closest translation for a word we don't have in English

Angels were divided into ten levels, namely little angels, ordinary angels, archangels, principality angels, virtue angels, power angels, dominion angels, throne angels, cherubim, and seraphim.

After Transmigrating as a Demon, I've Been Adopted by Angels!

After Transmigrating as a Demon, I've Been Adopted by Angels!

Fantasy · Tangerines and Watermelons

Atreyu_Parks
Atreyu_Parks
3 years ago
Commented

people and their hate on Maleficent

Ji-ah thought about how those were not the words she'd describe the Evil Queen. "Well, stay healthy, I guess."

Fallen Lightbringers' Return

Fallen Lightbringers' Return

Fantasy · Hyowha

Atreyu_Parks
Atreyu_Parks
3 years ago
Commented

it actually makes a lot of sense as kahjit are basically cats keeping a cat as a pet might seem more like slavery to them

"Shame! Jo'noud prefers dogs."

Dragonborn Saga

Dragonborn Saga

Video Games · El_Don

Atreyu_Parks
Atreyu_Parks
3 years ago
Replied to _Felix_

I'm pretty sure that is a artistic rendition of the MC of Overlord

Atreyu_Parks
Atreyu_Parks
3 years ago
Replied to Atreyu_Parks

and probably has something to do with the rank of the skill like the guardians tempering technique was estimated to be legendary so it can provide bigger benefits at lower levels

[Intuition has reached the capped limit, Unable to level up any further]

The Devil's Cage

The Devil's Cage

Games · Rusty Dragon

Atreyu_Parks
Atreyu_Parks
3 years ago
Replied to Son_Sea

pretty sure you have to upgrade the skill to a higher level like the cap of pro level is E+ but cap of the next rank would be D+ or something along those lines

[Intuition has reached the capped limit, Unable to level up any further]

The Devil's Cage

The Devil's Cage

Games · Rusty Dragon