TheDarkAbyssalLord

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To all readers,I accept all advice & criticism...however do heed the warning. No foul words or any colorful words. ×××Thank You!!!! ×××

2019-08-29 Se unió Philippines
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TheDarkAbyssalLord
TheDarkAbyssalLord
2 years ago
Replied to Neninho

Movies are also a type of literature..

TheDarkAbyssalLord
TheDarkAbyssalLord
2 years ago
Replied to ALazyReader

I also thought that he would win.. Because this is a wish fulfillment novel. The character development maybe necessary but it could have been better..

The system made him think he was far beyond his peers. He aimed for the brightest stars, only to achieve the moon. It would have been an accomplishment to anyone else but not him.

Reincarnated into Anime World

Reincarnated into Anime World

Anime & Comics · Spirits_everywhere

TheDarkAbyssalLord
TheDarkAbyssalLord
2 years ago
Commented

Are you an idiot? It's not a dialogue...

TheDarkAbyssalLord
TheDarkAbyssalLord
3 years ago
Commented

What all of you are yapping about? If you don't like what the author is doing don't read it. Criticism isn't needed in a webnovel, only recommendation or advice.

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The Rise of the Black Plain

The Rise of the Black Plain

Fantasy · RVN_1998

TheDarkAbyssalLord
TheDarkAbyssalLord
3 years ago
Commented

Just Read it and don't complain. The author is the one who decides what is what. If want your own way then make your own novel...

TheDarkAbyssalLord
TheDarkAbyssalLord
3 years ago
Commented

Of course, his the MC...

"Okay. I should be getting there," nodded Yu Sheng. His journey in cultivation was no easier than that of Ye Futian.

The Legend of Futian

The Legend of Futian

Eastern · Jing Wuhen

TheDarkAbyssalLord
TheDarkAbyssalLord
4 years ago
Commented

Then why didn't you make it in the first place..... Is this just to make him weak to strong

"Finally," Gwyn ap Nudd continued, ignoring my despair and anguish, "you will be changed. SYSTEM enhanced and reinforced your lineage with Belenos. But It adjusted only the lineage on your Seelie mother's side. Your hubris and arrogance are more reminiscent of your Unseelie Father. So that bloodline will be made whole to act in concert and opposition to the line of Belenos.

Rebirth and Second Chances

Rebirth and Second Chances

Fantasy · F_Riley