really both MC & ML have the same First name? author is that un-inspired or too lazy to give separate name?
he was 12 when she married his brother , her 2nd marriage to him doesn't happen till he is an adult.
What the hell!! isn't she supposed to know Taekwando?
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
I find the story interesting but there are loopholes in the plot that doesn't make sense. if she knew how to fight & be a strong character she wouldn't act cowardly in front of other people. why let those people run over u like that. not believable. the back story needs more details. no point in revenge if ur the one to let them walk over u like a coward u shown them.
are u sure he is 4 & not 14? he acts like a rebellious teenager!!!
[A/N: And what are you? You 4 years old brat!]
My Beloved
Urban · Flow07
incarnate should be incinerate means to burn it. please watch your language usage. you are still using taught instead of thought. rase is not a word. it should be race.
meat is animal food we eat MEET is to see someone or some things
Luckily the sea is clean and clear. So far they didn't meat any problems or dangerous animals.
She transmigrated and started different life
History · JennyS
taught should be thought. that is to think. the word taught is to teach. please watch your grammar & verbiage. you have used it wrongly alot.
He taught the little girl is cute.Kendra looked at the two and shook her head. Will she lose her sister to this boy. Isaa is just four what is she thinking about.
She transmigrated and started different life
History · JennyS
if names are in alphabetical order why is Scarlett an S instead of D?
Transmigrating from a zombie world to become the mecha kings wife
Sci-fi · 1cutecat