"Had and had" I'm not quite sure I understand what you mean here author thanks for the hard work tho
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Fantasy · Blue_Robin
You probably need to add "to" to the sentence as how use fat doesn't work Otherwise well done I'm just pointing it out as it's the only mistake I've seen so far
My eyes flicked over to the stove as I began to consider how use the fat of the meat to make the oil I would use.
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Fantasy · Blue_Robin
im a bit sad can we at least get the name or a link to the original you were translating please
thanks i loved it and dont stress about meeting the daily chap just try not to leave a week empty with no reason why is all i ask
it begins
looking forward to more chapters this first one seems quite good as an intro
Might be worth just having "had" and remove the "had and" to make more sense
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Fantasy · Blue_Robin