The first impression I had was that you were trying to copy Gojo's personality and the result was a caricature. Another point was people's lack of appropriate reaction to the MC's power. The guy creates curses, he can probably create a curse with the same powers as Gojo. He has the potential to create an army of curses on the same level as Gojo The story looks cool, but still needs work.
Apparently smiling is half his personality. You need to work more on his reactions.
I'm going with 3. I don't really like other OCs being involved when the MC is already one
Another normal story of a super competent MC.
This is not your world. It's not your Japan. Stop acting like someone owes you something. I would love it if the King of souls would appear and show the power of a creator God.
You disappeared ? I didn't even notice Baka. Hump. But since you're here, it's best to stick to the schedule. Baka
What a dumb reason to be a hero.
We can only hope. My biggest issue is with the hypocrisy of the MC.
I don't remember, but does that erase her crimes?
The conversations are strange, poorly developed, and overall garbage. Apparently, the characters simply trust him after a few lines and a lot of time skips. The MC seems like a weird, stalkerish teenager with a false sense of importance and a lot of plot armor to support the horrible quality of the story. We literally know nothing about him except that he has eighth-grade syndrome. Either this story was written by an AI or by a 14-year-old teenager. I don't know which is worse.
Buffy: Self insert
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