I really like this Naruto story the only problem is, what are you going to do when you catch up to the original? (Yes, this story already exist in Fanfiction.net, under the name Dark Phoenix.)
moonstone= fegaropetra Shadeflower= skialoutho
Just a small reminder. This is not how an argument with an elderly person whould go ( I am refering to the wand argument obviously). You could have argued that Neville was not only his father's son, but also his mother's, therefore, the result of their love would be a colmination of both of them instead of only the father. Now, I am not saying my argument would work better than yours, just that it is one that it has less of a wiggle room for Augusta to argue. At the end of the day, this is your novel and you can and will do what you want. This is just a comment from a fan of you and your story, that believes, said comment could be a stronger argument. Thank you for your hard work. I hope to read more of it.
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Harry Potter and the Dovahkiin
Book&Literature · DreamyApe
no harem pls
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Harry Potter and the Dovahkiin
Book&Literature · DreamyApe
no harem
-No Harem (Vote here)
I'm Batman (HP Xover)
Movies · AlienWarlord
Δεν θα την πειράξεις δαίμονα, και αν ξαναπροσπαθήσης, θα σε εξοντώσω. This is a right way of saying it.
Before I could ask what she meant by that, she turned to face the darkness once again, and with a tone devoid of any emotion, she spoke in a language I had never heard before, "Δεν θα πειράξεις τον δαίμονά της, και αν προσπαθήσετε ξανά, θα σας εξοντώσω προσωπικά." Soon after she said that, a high pitched scream of agony was heard, as the darkness around us dissolved like a mist, soon enough, returning things to normal.
MARVEL: GAMER PATH
Movies · CORNBRINGER
I am from Greece, and let me tell you I was confused about what you wrote Author.
Before I could ask what she meant by that, she turned to face the darkness once again, and with a tone devoid of any emotion, she spoke in a language I had never heard before, "Δεν θα πειράξεις τον δαίμονά της, και αν προσπαθήσετε ξανά, θα σας εξοντώσω προσωπικά." Soon after she said that, a high pitched scream of agony was heard, as the darkness around us dissolved like a mist, soon enough, returning things to normal.
MARVEL: GAMER PATH
Movies · CORNBRINGER
I 100% recommend this if you like Harry Potter and want to read a good Harry Potter fanfiction. Only prroblem is that it already exist and is finished in Fanfiction. It's called Apex by JustBored21
The Real Harry Potter
Book&Literature · Infinity_Weaver