waste my time*
I wrote another 3000 word review but deleted it, since this novel didn't deserve that hate. No, it deserves "HATRED". I wish the author never learned English so as not to have water my time. Bloody hell, you had a potential goldmine on your hand because of your unique world and its power system but an atrocious abomination you have created. There is nothing good here since like the author who I suspect ate his sibling in the womb, the bad, worse and the worst part of the story have completely cannibalized the miniscule particle sized good that this novel had. Heck, at this point reading 10 Dozen absolutely generic cultivator novels about a mc with cheats would be better than cursing your eyes and torturing your brain by seeing and reading this piece of garbage. It's been 2 or 3 weeks since the story started. And chapter 1 to chapter 1000 encapsulated all this. I don't mind if authors do this but honestly you need to know your damn worth and talent. You cannot milk 3 weeks for 1000 goddamn chapters. You have no talent or patience for it. Anyways, don't read beyond 50 or 100. It's enough to get a taste of what the card system (the power system is and can do. That's all.
Only a little. But I remember chuckling to myself thinking Sara probably never took him seriously or became frustrated with his dilly dallying that she was already in a relationship or maybe even secretly married. It would have been nice if before he died he knew this particular heart wrecking information. Probably would have led to a lot of character development or maybe character distortion from the very beginning of the story.😂
Seconds later, his vision started to get blurry and his hearing started fading in and out. He faintly sees the figure of someone moving near him but he couldn't make out who it is.
Creating an Industrial Empire in 19th Century Parallel World
History · SorryImJustDiamond
You need an editor.
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The Mechanical Era
Fantasy · MaxLostchild
suicide doors?
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The Mechanical Era
Fantasy · MaxLostchild
Is bro a measurement tape?
He's somewhere 165 centimeters tall!
Creating an Industrial Empire in 19th Century Parallel World
History · SorryImJustDiamond
He was*
He is expecting to wake up in a brightly-lit hospital room. Instead, he woke up in a cold dark alley with a body he didn't recognize.
Creating an Industrial Empire in 19th Century Parallel World
History · SorryImJustDiamond
Probably Sara. What a miss. If she had tranmigrated with you she would have no choice but to marry you lol.
Seconds later, his vision started to get blurry and his hearing started fading in and out. He faintly sees the figure of someone moving near him but he couldn't make out who it is.
Creating an Industrial Empire in 19th Century Parallel World
History · SorryImJustDiamond
your hands are already mush bro.
"No…" Poul weakly uttered as he struggled to move away. He tried to lift himself up but failed to do so. He tried to reach him with his hand but his hand won't obey his orders.
Creating an Industrial Empire in 19th Century Parallel World
History · SorryImJustDiamond
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original Halo Of Chaos
"We are everything creation has to offer. We are ambition and curiosity, we are both destroyer and creator. We are graceful mercy and benevolence to those kindred, and we are undying fury and pure malevolence for those that impede our way. We are flawed but driven towards perfection. We are the Imperium. And our destiny is to walk among the Stars; To rule them all." – Duke Of Horror. ---2 Chs 2 Colecciones
My hatred for this hack "author" every chapter lol
Card Apprentice Daily Log
Games · IGotStones