these days, chapters seems like fillers, I get that we need to understand the pov of all differents parties involved but 1 chap per pov seems a little too much... Anyway it is still a good novel but I'm worried for the rest of the story
ch 120 It should have been an easy victory
Fantasy · WinterDragon_1
I think it is quite good, but for me there is too much psychological / philosophical thinking by the MC like 60% of the novel is him thinking about things. At least it's written well but I think you're abusing on MC and his thoughts. Also (maybe it's bc of plot) MC is always in a shitty situation, I understand that you want him to grow little by little but it is too much for me. For the moment the quality of writing is here and the world building seems good. To sum up it's a good novel but it can be improved by a lot !
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Fantasy · Okojus