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Seriously he choose Feast instead of the Happy Funeral that gives him +1 attributes if he died after reaching 100yrs old and instead turns himself into a f*ck*ng delicacy in a fantasy world wherein monsters, beast, and demons that eats humans exist? What's not dangerous with that f*ckup choice?

I would really stop reading this if the self compliments that sound too arogant didn't stop..... it's ok to compliment yourself, but atleast do it at the right time not almost every time something happen favorable to you..

This novel would nit attract that much reader if this thing happens repeatedly..... like man the Mc said that he feels confident in choosing a cultivation technique because of his system but he didn't even f*ckng use it....... and just choose the most powerful technique that he see. If this isn't fix, this novel won't have that much future..

I want to suggest for them to make their Castle or Fortress in the dessert to be underground wherein the only way to enter is through their guild house teleportation array and let Cain have the authority to allow who can enter it..... Underground base would be much better so that they would not encounter too much problem for it, afterall they were trying to create an oasis like thing in their territory so it's much better to make it underground to not attract unnecessary trouble for their guild.....

The talent didn't deserve the rating of SSS, dude it can only made him invisible and nothing else it would be understandable to rate it as S class than SSS......

The novel seems good, the only thing that I didn't like about the Mc is that he's impulsive, doesn't think much on what effect his actions can bring to people around him, not cautious at all, seems to be so arrogant and a little bit of lustful for the fact that he didn't kill the girl just because she's hot not thinking that the father of Williams might know that he's the one that killed his son because one of the people that was always with his son is now together with the Mc and because of this danger might come to the Mc's friend and sister......... Also the Mc feels like not a person that came from the future and just gone back to his past self, the fact that he was a little shock about the attempted assassination on his life by the order of William really isn't a reaction a person that already experience such thing in his previous life.....

Really? that was pretty dumb Mc already, seeing a guy eating something squeeshy and you still call for him even with the knowledge of zombie and the fact that you transmigrate?

Good Stuff....... waiting for the next chapter

man 3x10,000 = 30,000 and not 3,000 so the reward should have been 30 gold coin instead of 3 gold coin....

Reward system isn't really that accurate, at some point the reward would only be comparable to 1000x and then sometimes it would be 100,000x.... Like man you need to fix this one