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Soulflower

female LV 15

Lazy and likes to eat cake.

2019-06-19 Se unió Norway

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Unless there is a big timeskip I don’t think you should feel the need to write timeskip or even break them apart with a line especially when you continue after with something that show that time has passed. I often feel like it breaks the flow of what I am reading. I love the story so far and hope you keep it up.

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