ProGamer1411

2 months ago

Commented

Either Moonveil or the Poleblade of the Bud

Playthrough: Twin Magma Blades

Elden Ring: Miquella's Consort

Video Games · That_One_Dead_Ali

ProGamer1411

4 months ago

Commented

Yes

1. To see the MC have an additional partner later in the novel? (Y/N/Comment)

Twilight: Rebirth

Movies · DumbedDown

ProGamer1411

6 months ago

Commented

I personally quite like the story. I haven't seen any strong issues up until now. I find the story to be very interesting and I like the fact that the topic isn't as often used as some stories where you can find another story with the same topic if you look for 2 minutes. A character like constantine is generally used less often, and I find his system of exorcism magic to work extremely well with the Harry Potter world

I would like to hear your thoughts on this book. Are you enjoying it so far? Also, is the quality of the writing readable? Are there any grammar mistakes or issues that are hindering your reading experience? Your feedback will not only assist me but also enhance your enjoyment of the story. If there are any aspects of the story that you're not fond of, please let me know so I can address them. Constructive criticism is valuable and will help me improve the story. I encourage you all to read a few more chapters, as I believe this story has a lot of potential and is quite engaging. Thank you for your time and feedback.