He skipped the preliminary testing with it.
Ah I changed it a little whole back to make more sense, I missed this instance will update it soon.
"Wood, High Heaven; Water, High Earth; Fire, High Earth; Metal, Low Heaven; Earth, Low Heaven".
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Sorry I hadn't updated it to a the better ranking system, done now.
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Eastern · ShiroN3K0
His Azure flame is his normal Qi, I did want to make the flame dual coloured but couldn't get a good result and my editing skills aren't quite good enough, I will definitely look in to getting a proper cover drawn in the future though.
I bit the bullet and updated it, the cover art MC is still a bit older than the current one, and his skin isn't as pale but it will do for now.
I haven't really got the funds but I already made a ai edited cover that's just the mc.
I'm already keeping that in mind.
He won't, he need help and advice that's the only reason he did so.
In the distant future.
Thanks for the feedback, I agree that the pacing is a bit slow I've been trying to fight the 'Asspull' feeling by slowly developing the MC but unfortunately making that interesting at the same time is a bit hard. We'll that's why I'm writing to improve I guess.
Providence of the Heavenly Flame
Eastern · ShiroN3K0