Raziel_Acedia

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2019-05-31 Se unió United States
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Raziel_Acedia
Raziel_Acedia
3 months ago
Commented

If Aang is older, is Bumi older too?

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Raziel_Acedia
Raziel_Acedia
4 months ago
Commented

Don’t pander to the audience to get more views. It may work short term for views but it ruins the story for all the readers who would be here long term.

And I noticed something. Whenever a story with a degenerate premise is created it almost gets nearly 50K views within a week and that's just the minimum, while mine barely got 30K views after all this time. Not that I'm ungrateful, I'm very much happy that I got this much views to be honest. So is that the secret for more views? but nearly all the time, the stories are just a brain rot which serves no purpose than wasting our time. So I'd like to know about your thoughts on my take. Wanna know if I'm alone or if I got my bros with me.

MHA- PROJECTION

MHA- PROJECTION

Anime & Comics · I_Like_that_thighs

Raziel_Acedia
Raziel_Acedia
5 months ago
Commented

As someone who came here directly after finishing a re-read of A Magical Journey I’m getting a sense of Deja vu…

In this world, Harry Potter was still the Boy-Who-Lived, but his parents were also still alive, and he even had a twin sister to make matters worse, bringing quite a change to the timeline.

Harry Potter: Heir of Darkness

Harry Potter: Heir of Darkness

Book&Literature · SlyOW

Raziel_Acedia
Raziel_Acedia
5 months ago
Replied to Kumatsume

The internal voice is normal Quinn. Before he went to sleep he let Sin-Quinn take over so Luxuria is piloting his body at the moment.

'Yeah, about that. . . not going to happen. We want her, don't we?'

HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader

Raziel_Acedia
Raziel_Acedia
5 months ago
Commented

Red fits him as is

Raziel_Acedia
Raziel_Acedia
6 months ago
Posted

Great story overall. Does contain yuri in the harem so stay away if that’s not your thing. Only suggestion for the author is to add a separation and warning when you do pov switches and major scene changes as that can get really messy and can be hard to follow. Otherwise keep up the good work 😁

Raziel_Acedia
Raziel_Acedia
6 months ago
Replied to Melegant

Random Omnipotent Being

"You know, you just watched my entire life and you can't remember my name, are you really the fabled ROB?"

In Naruto: With Shanks Template

In Naruto: With Shanks Template

Anime & Comics · LordRaphael

Raziel_Acedia
Raziel_Acedia
7 months ago
Commented

“… my left leg.” <should be right leg

Raziel_Acedia
Raziel_Acedia
7 months ago
Commented

100 years*

Raziel_Acedia
Raziel_Acedia
8 months ago
Commented

Something about the way you type spell names makes them not show up. Either they show as “” or nothing at all making it hard to figure out which spells he is using

His eyes twinkled with amusement, "Although... to use the curse, a fourth year spell in your first year and I have also heard from your professors that your wandwork is well beyond your years and your peers. Jeep up the good work, my boy." He nodded his head sagely and left followed by few of the professors. McGonagall escorted me to the Gryffindor Tower bade me a good night before leaving.

Re : Harry Potter

Re : Harry Potter

Book&Literature · Hellblazer_Crusher