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Bio-Mechanical Warfare
Sci-fi · Allen_Clay012
Overall This work has a good story and I won't spoil it. The plot is interesting and the flow of the story is good. It is very readable and the author has a good grasp of storytelling. The pacing is fine, not too fast or slow. Pros Action packed, well paced and has a good MC. Not too overpowered, but can fend for himself if needed. MC is good natured and likeable. Cons MC was too submissive, but I can understand because of his circumstances. He lived in a world where humans are not the top of the food chain. Others Reminds me of Conan the Barbarian or Berserk. Sadly, the MC just faced overwhelming odds against his favor.
I cannot help but praise the author of the skill displayed in writing this novel. This is not the usual stuff you read in this platform. This story is one of the best I read. Also, the chapter update is solid I believe that this work will reach a milestone within the suceeding months. Keep writing, you have made a good work. It only needs exposure!
This is a work of art! I salute you for your writing. 👌
This is an interesting story. It's dark and does not fit to everyone's taste. I will not spoil the story but here is my take: The scenes are well described and the story is engaging to read. I can really sense and feel the character's reaction and emotions reading the story. It's really a dark start and I can tell the reader had invested in the story itself. I am giving this story an overall perfect 5.0 for its potential. I can see the writer did a good job. Keep writing, you have done well!
This fanfic is good and so far faithful to the original. The MC is also likeable. I have no complaints about this story. Keep up the good work!
★★★★★ Holy! the first chapter is crazy! 🤯 If you read it, you won't be able to stop. The suspense will make you keep turning pages, and the plot twists will make your heart pound. The author is a genius at controlling emotions. This book is beyond awesome! —— Aside from that, I can tell you that this author has a lot of potential. Keep on writing!
The story has a good start, its not boring. It had a good pace and the characters were relatable. I can tell they had distinct personalities as well... For the writing, the grammar was okay. I havent seen any mistakes so far. The dialogues and prose is easy to read and understand. I bet the MC theres a lot of surprise we see on the way. However, I got a feeling that a potential love story is starting already. I am going to follow this story for more. Keep on writing, you started the story good. It captivated me with the world building as well. I am interested to know how witches relate to the story. Thank you for introducing me this work. Do your best!
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original Bio-Mechanical Warfare
Andre Wilson, a mercenary contracted by Valhalla Limited, embarked on a mission. They were to protect their client’s interest and deescalate a potential conflict by two militia groups. However, an unknown group of militants ambushed them. They were no ordinary enemy and possess advanced bio-terror weapons at their disposal. Almost facing death at the encounter. A friendly Bio-Mech Squad saved Andre and his friends. The event changed his life, owing to the squad that saved him. Amazed by constructs and the men behind the behemoth, he vowed to join the ranks of the “Bio-Mechanized Warfare Corps.” He vowed to one day make a difference in a country torn by war, chaos, and manipulation of foreign entities. As a Cornalian by birth, he wished to end the Proxy War that plagued his homeland. Will he succeed with his goals?27 Chs 33 Colecciones
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The Elven Lord's Awakening
4.88 Completado
Elios was a former Elven Demon Lord that was reincarnated as a human. He recently awakens during the last days of Shayne's term as a corporate employee. Despite living in an advanced world, beings like gods exists to whom he made a deal. "Follow the whim of the All Father!" Due to his nature, he could not become the benevolent creature he envisioned himself to be. Did he even try? Whether or not Elios was sincere was out of the question. His actions prove otherwise, he was planning something else. Will his plan become successful? Or would the gods find out and punish him instead? ------ Discord: https://discord.gg/D4r2KkFS72 Chs 357 Colecciones
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The Genesis Trilogy
The Genesis Trilogy: Europan Dawn Synopsis: The Genesis series are books written on the formation of the Europan Combine. The first book was written during the time of the second Europan-Umayar war when the Europans counter-attacked to recover the lands they lost to the Umayar during the previous war. The book was based on the sacrifices of heroes who fought against the Umayar for the freedom and integrity of the Europan continent. The second book was a fictional book written after the Second Europan-Umayar War. The second Genesis was a book about the journey and the exploration of the new world. It was based on the story of the Age of Exploration that followed the second war. the return of a famous The third book was a fictional book written based on one of Europa's greatest explorations to the new world. It told of a story about the successful return of the crew of "His Majesty" from the long and dangerous travel. ---------------- First Genesis: Iron Claw and the Serpent Synopsis: The lion returns to save his kingdom and liberate his lands. Alexi was the last member of the Dynellan Family. His goal was to return and free the lands under his dynasty and claim his birthright. Everything was thought to have gone well until a fateful meeting changed his plans. Upon the iron crest that symbolizes his authority as the sole heir of his dynasty, he must not fail. He is the only hope of his people. The lion shall defeat his enemies. Will the lion succeed in reclaiming his throne and save his people? ------------ Author's note: I decided to expand the story. I don't know if I can finish this work but I will do my best to write what I can. Thank you so much for your support, I appreciate it! Upload Schedule: Every 1st and 3rd week of the month! Rate of upload 5 to 7 chapters per week. Update: I will also post the story in Royal Road under the same title. I will continue to update the story on this website. You can find my profile in Royalroad with this URL: https://www.royalroad.com/profile/4245539 Chs 20 Colecciones
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The Verlusian Conspiracy
4.68 Completado
Schemes, lies and plots. The devices people in power use to remain in their seats. Underneath of the conflict and power struggle an unknown entity is being born. They are not born of greed nor thirst for lust or even crave for avarice. They are a phantom but a shadow the country has summoned in its turmoil. Should chaos ensues shall the defenders of the land be enough in ensuring the safety of the people? A new hope rises from slumber. As chaos engulf the land and hopelessness aflict the people, will his efforts be enough? Notice: The author will stop posting updates in this website. This story will be posted on Royalroad.com due to some reasons. To the readers and followers of the story, the author expreses his thanks. This story will be written by the username "KriegBringer" in RoyalRoad.com.29 Chs 80 Colecciones
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Steel Legion
Welcome to post apocalypse! If given the chance for a new life what will you choose? If your life is once full of lies, will you choose to drown yourself with it or jump to the abyss? My life was once filled with lies before the Legion. Faulty facts are implanted to our brains, knowledge that is nonexistent. All of these nonsense they fill your head till it bloats of ignorance. That's right, that is what I thought before joining the Legion. A band of mercenaries in a post apocalyptic world. They are no pushovers and trust me, they will steamroll anything that is against their way. Did I make the right decision? It's up for you to decide!10 Chs 7 Colecciones
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Path of Truth: Seer
Seers are those who seek for the truth. They use the truth to bring justice to the world, no matter the cost. Seers must know of the side they are destined for not all truths are all the same. The thing they seek could be a double edged sword. It can both benefit and harm them in the process. You are born to this world for a purpose. To maintain the balance is your main goal. Do not let them, the Seekers end your duty. Survive and fulfill your purpose with the time given to you.3 Chs 1 Colecciones
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Contract: Making Of A Hero (MLBB Story)
The story revolves around a good-for-nothing middle aged man who is still living in his parents basement. He is living a sad life out of bad choices he made in his youth and is suffering because of it. One day a dreadful incident has changed his life forever. The Land of Dawn, a new place where he can redeem himself and his past. He is transported into a different world before he could breathe his last. However all is not for free. A contract must be made to ensure his stay in the land of dawn is of worth. His life to be worth of something and an exchange is required. To be a hero that is the condition. He is not to become an ordinary hero but to be someone whom he see to be fit. By right he has the right to become who he wants to be, easy right? How will Simon lead his life in his new adventures in the land of dawn?11 Chs 7 Colecciones
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Philosophy Behind The Flesh Weapon: Alpha (Alpha Fanfic)
Completado
"Sometimes, I think about... girls!" The very line we hear from the famous weapon made of flesh named Alpha. Beyond that line what does he think besides having a girl by his side? His philosophies in life, his struggles and lastly about his fight for his survival in the land of dawn.3 Chs 10 Colecciones
First Impression This story is relatable to my childhood anime shows. It is similar to that famous shoujo school girl sailor student anime shows. It is a fun read, I recommend this story if you are interested with the genre. In depth review I never thought that this story was a fanfic. The premise is way original and the way the story unfolds is different. Although there were elements I see which were similar to an anime I saw. I found this story standing out. The pacing was fine, not overwhelming and gives us time to digest what the story was all about. The character was relatable also, with the character's perks being likeable as well. Lastly, the writing quality is good. It's detailed and describes the scenes well. Closing I had fun reading this story. I see that the author is dedicated in writing. To the author, keep up your good work. There's a lot in store for you and this story.
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