PiousLight

PiousLight

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2019-05-10 Se unió Global
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PiousLight
PiousLight
2 months ago
Commented

Wasn't this guy the second Mizukage?

Mei Terumi, knelt before the newly appointed Fifth Mizukage,Gengetsu Hōzuki, who had a look of anticipation on his face.

Naruto: The Resurrection of the Senju clan

Naruto: The Resurrection of the Senju clan

Anime & Comics · Shinchan_37

PiousLight
PiousLight
2 months ago
Posted

Es una historia bastante entretenida, el concepto en si es bueno y el sistema implementa es interesante para una historia de One Piece, un Coby pirata le da una perspectiva a la historia que tenerlo como un Marine que llevaría a su proclamación a Luffy que “no dejaría que cumpliera su sueño”, ¡esa pequeña mierda hiso que mataran a Garp! (Hasta el día de esta reseña creo que así ha sido) y tiene el descaro de decir eso, *suspirar* típico perro del Gobierno Mundial, Solo espero que este Coby no sea igual o piense demasiado con su pene para el caso. También se agradecería que no se utilizara tanto la I.A. o por lo menos tratar de cambiar las palabras o dejar de exagerar en algunos aspectos, es bastante obio para alguien que uso la I.A. para terminar su tesis jeje. De ahí en mas es bastante entretenido no para pagar el Pa/treon pero si entretenido para pasar el tiempo, gracias por la historia autor.

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PiousLight
PiousLight
3 months ago
Posted

Seriously author friend, what the fuck? He's already reading the part where he was leaving with Kuina and Sabo, but they came across a scene that made the MC's blood run cold and you go out and remove all the chapters, you should have started another book or warned me, I just came across this book today and wanted to finish it where you left off *sigh*. Well the damage is done, so I'll ask: Now that you are going to rewrite it are you going to add Uta when Shanks first arrives Dawn Island? To end it's a good story, I didn't agree on many of the MC's decisions but it was entertaining, thanks for that author.

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PiousLight
PiousLight
5 months ago
Commented

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"I would rather not name it that..but if it's up to me then I would like it to be called 'Restaurant Of In Between'." I nodded, truly a fitting name.

Restaurant Of In Between

Restaurant Of In Between

Anime & Comics · Charlottes

PiousLight
PiousLight
5 months ago
Commented

The Amaranth of the Current Dream

The world of the Elder Scrolls originated from an entity referred to as the 'Godhead', this entity is the ultimate being that creates the Universe by dreaming about it. It means that this entity is unconscious and unaware of it creating a world.

Dragonborn Saga

Dragonborn Saga

Video Games · El_Don

PiousLight
PiousLight
6 months ago
Commented

Why is that skill so rare? ruler authority should at least be Legendary and I'm coming up very short with the rating. Rulers and Monarchs were created directly by a being that created a universe, a creator being, of the same caliber as Aedra from Elder Scrolls, Star King Dragon Veldanava, Arceus or any creator god you can name, sure it's not Amaranth from Elder Scrolls but still Absolute Being is in its own category, an ability of its children of light simply classified as rare makes it look like it's a very nearfeatured ability.

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[Congratulations Host, You have received: A Rune Stone: Rulers Authority (Rare)] 

Sovereign Conjurer: Ultimate Gacha in a Mix Anime World

Sovereign Conjurer: Ultimate Gacha in a Mix Anime World

Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3

PiousLight
PiousLight
8 months ago
Commented

Just do a Kenpachi and break that stone in half!

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PiousLight
PiousLight
8 months ago
Commented

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At this point there's already millions of fanfiction about that damn series, I don't care how huge Tsunade tits are, point is I won't add it in this fic.

Multiversal: The Shop

Multiversal: The Shop

Anime & Comics · Charlottes

PiousLight
PiousLight
1 years ago
Commented

!jajaja si era esa historia! Autor, si vas a monetizar por esta historia ¡por lo menos trabaja más en los capitulo por favor! Necesitas trabajar más al momento de diferenciar cuando un personaje estaba hablando es bastante incomodo cuando no sabes si un personaje habla o está realizando alguna acción (Creo que alguien más lo había notado y lo reseño, estoy totalmente de acuerdo con ese tipo), puedes usar la siempre confiable "comillas dobles" o dividirlo entre (paréntesis) hace que tu trabajo se vea más estético.

PiousLight
PiousLight
1 years ago
Commented

I knew it looked familiar! Context: that is the original title of this story.

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-... I will paint this world orange! - He admitted, seeing Rias' shoulders fall and she had a face like: "really that"?

DxD: I Like Orange

DxD: I Like Orange

Anime & Comics · William777