DNHELO

DNHELO

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I like music, computers, swimming and fantasy books. Every wednesday and Sunday I publish a chapter of my novel :"the life-story of a cactus"

2019-05-08 Se unió Portugal
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DNHELO
DNHELO
3 months ago
Replied to PizzaStopsTime

Yes, don't remember the name but the story is about a quirkless vigilant kid turned hero by ua trained by stain named bullet with 3 personilties and the ending is pretty sad because the Mc gets heavily injured (lost members and need to use prosthetics) and the fl dies of a desiese that the author decided she had (that causes her to be a savant genius with a low lifespan) but the Mc can allways remember her because of their children

Tony nodded his head. "It's a weapon manufacturer for heroes, but they don't only build weapons. They build costumes and other advanced gadgets for heroes. It's one of the leading manufacturers in the world, extending to multiple states, with the largest one, or in other words, the main headquarters, being here in the United States."

I Am Ironman (MHA)

I Am Ironman (MHA)

Anime & Comics · Shadow_D_Monarch3

DNHELO
DNHELO
3 months ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter

DNHELO
DNHELO
3 months ago
Commented

Doesn't Margit protect the gates to godrick castle? I thought his relationship with him would be better

"Why art thou here?" Godrick announced, slamming the spear into the earth in a show of anger, but subtly positioning himself before his blood-grown creation. "I have no quarrel with Margit the Fell."

Elden Ring : Godrick The Golden

Elden Ring : Godrick The Golden

Video Games · Marine0IQ

DNHELO
DNHELO
3 months ago
Posted

Really nice book with a good and interesting premise. The execution is also good as of now (chapter 13)

DNHELO
DNHELO
4 months ago
Commented

Thanks for the story, probably my favorite fan-fiction ever, read it trough rough times and good times, funnily I find myself in one of the best times I've ever had in all of my life and I feel like this book couldn't have a better time to end.

DNHELO
DNHELO
4 months ago
Commented

Probably traces back to how when nick altered the rats soul it tried to adapt the body to the souls new shape. I'd assume that the body gets shaped by the soul to some extent , even more so to a maliable body like that of the daedra

Nick considered this to be a last resort type thing such as the case with the Zanpakuto spirit or Celebrimbor where it was quite literally their only option for living. An interesting thing Nick discovered however was that becoming a daedra did not strip the Zanpakuto spirit of it's own abilities but rather seemed to turn them into bloodline abilities for it. This was quite fascinating as far as Nick was concerned as the abilities weren't a part of their body originally but from their soul so the change from metaphysical to physical was VERY big.

Harry potter: The ringmaker

Harry potter: The ringmaker

Book&Literature · loskro

DNHELO
DNHELO
8 months ago
Commented

Multiverse level justice league, don't create a justice league in this planet instead once the Multiverse arc against tbwl or something starts you can pick up the op versions of each hero and make a mukriversal class justice league

So if you have some ideas why the Justice League would be created, then I would appreciate it

Different Batman

Different Batman

Anime & Comics · Cedric_7512

DNHELO
DNHELO
8 months ago
Commented

Bro my country has foods with chicken blood in it. That's why hmi allways found her backstory dumb

Este libro ha sido eliminado.
DNHELO
DNHELO
8 months ago
Commented

Liquid luck

I was tempted to outright reject him in spite but I had a gut feeling that wouldn't end very well and capitulated. "I can't just make the charge go away and need to at least appear as though I punished the girl and that takes resources. Leverage in all the right places and frankly speaking I don't want to expend them myself." I said bluntly since the boy wants to do this quickly. To my surprise the boy waved his hand and a small bottle of golden colored potion appeared in his hand that he set on my desk.

Harry potter: The ringmaker

Harry potter: The ringmaker

Book&Literature · loskro

DNHELO
DNHELO
9 months ago
Posted

100 chapters, I've read this for 100 chapter. Consistently saying to myself "I like the system and the idea so let's keep reading " but honestly I can't do so anymore. The last 3 chapters 97 to 100 felt like a sausage fest who's only reason to be there was to pull at the mcs ego and harem. The story doesn't delve deep into any character or plot line and there is no tension because of how overwhelmingly meaningless all conflict feels

  • The life-story of a cactus! original

    The life-story of a cactus!

    Fantasy ADVENTURE REINCARNATION SYSTEM MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG NONHUMAN VIDEOGAME EVOLUTION NOCHEATS

    Here i am, chilling on my spot, at the usual desert, when I sudently realise that... I'm a freaking cactus! ///2 chapters a week, one on Wednesday and one on Sunday Hello everyone. I have big plans for my book's plot but there are also things I have yet to plan. I'm planning to come up with names, skills and even certain minor events as I write . As such, feel free to give me your input on things you'd like me to change and/or add to the book☺️. Thanks for reading, Dnhelo.

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