ok, the first chapter got me hooked. again.
At first, I really enjoyed reading this. it was definitely different from other stories and I really liked that but it got kind of uncomfortable in later chapters, actually, it became kind of similar to the obvious plot😟. the beginning was really fun to read and funny; then it got dark. Little too dark actually ( or maybe it's just me who found it to be dark) after this it kind of became similar to the rest of the sort of obvious plot. it kind of felt a little bit rushed. the ending was satisfactory. tell you the truth, I believe you can write great stories. you got a creative mind. so keep up the hard work.
Read this story on your own risk, it's not a sweet romance if you are looking forward to it. . . At first it sounded like a sweet romance story but turned out that it's actually dark and has shown human flaws. In my opinion it's also somewhat disturbing but I think author described it well. Let's be honest , in our modern age we have a lot of problems with marriages. Some times is a couple who ruins their marriage and other times there are other people who ruines other people marriages . I think this story in a way describe such situations well. I have an idea how it will end. But I must say author is very brave to write this😅 don't get me wrong, I think u need courage to write such situations . All I would like to say at the end , if you wanna read this one you need to have an open mind to accept any type of situation. Like i said , read it in your own risk.
so far is going well, honestly how come no one has commented on this yet?😕 tell you the truth, it made me kind of sad. She could not see her daughter grow up. 8 years is a really long time. i would like to say please give this book a chance.
Honestly I kind of feel bad for Nia. I mean is true that she's hurting a lot of people ; she is not greedy for power and only wants to be free from this disgusting situation. Let's be honest here, he is not just a brother but a twin🤢. I might have done, the same if i were in her place. She doesn't even has the freedom to love and above that, Aku is possessive. And if Nia were to be honest with him about her feelings, I believe she would have been chained by now and would be assaulted again and again.
P.S I forgot to mention this, your novel needs a little bit of editing here and there. not gonna lie, your story is an addiction to the likes of me, and I know that it will get better. keep it up.
The first thing which got my attention was the name. 2nd thing royals. 3rd royal romance and lastly, 3 romance leads💗💗. honestly, when it's come to these types of stories, I can't help but dote on them. I hope more people come forward and support your novel.
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
All I want to say is, how come I never noticed this Author before? not gonna lie, I have only checked 3 stories from this author so far and loved all 3 of them. I haven't finished reading them but I can tell, I'm gonna love em very much. in other words, totally recommended. really, wonderful job sweet author. keep up the good work [img=recommend]
I'm only at chapter 8 but, I couldn't stop myself from reviewing this boook. 1. Writing is good. I won't say excellent because it doesn't pass that category. But it doesn't you are not gonna get better at it. You can do really well with few more writings. 2. I love how you created a such a different FL. I mean whenever you read a story, FL is always beautiful extra ordinary nd if she is hated, she is still beautiful this and that. And if it's a obese FL, she always looses weight and becomes a very attractive woman who's followed by every hot/popular guy in the town / world or whatever. But the FL in this story is very beautiful, at least this is what I think. She doesn't not have a perfect body but u described her characteristics. She has a sweet , soft and loving voice . She is caring and hard working, kind and respectful. And lastly she's not a busybody. I haven't finished the whole book so I can't say anything more. I hope that i was able to express my feelings thorough this.
The Criminal Who Stole My Heart
Teen · Michelle_Sosa