Xie_Tian

Great!!! Like, what's the point of adding OC harem members especially when the world you are writing is set in DXD......does DXD have too little Female Cast.....

Record of Ragnarok

Looks like Ultra Instinct came out!!!

The little sister part is especially disgusting since even though the mc is always thinking about her safety. He was literally thinking about her in the last chap and is worried to go to mission cause she's not really safe even though there is the guild. Going from that scene to now makes me think that the little sister don't really deserve to be part of the group chat and all the care that the mc has given her. I know you're just going to make a PoV of her accepting powers from so that she can help her brother more, but that will just be superficial and cliche since I know that it's just an excuse.

I agree with Useless_g. This 'comedy' is not really funny especially with how the sister easily "betrayed" him even with all the things hed done for her. This chap made me not like the little sister( even if you made a PoV of her the damage is done).I don't know why you find this funny comedy, but the chapter really made frustrated. Not gonna lie my frustrations made me think of the scenario that the mc, due to frustration, didn't enter and let D get the spot to see how the other members suffer due to their actions. I think highly of you because this is a very good fic. This chap is not really for me and i think it's still good, but not for me. I don't say that i don't like your work but with how his little sister betrayed him is not just something I like. Good chap. I hope to see the next chapter!

Good luck. I hope the new rewrite is better. As long as you don't drop this fanfic I will support you!