*feeling
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*Hao feel even
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*positions in a few
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Do we know what stage it's at? Maybe it's something that the system may list in the future so we can see it's slow lazy progress.
Pet: Lazy Winged Lion
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*Back then when he and *Realm he was faced
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I suppose it's more of a word choice suggestion but thunder is the noise created by lighting (and thunderstrike isn't a word) maybe you were reaching for lightning strike or maybe you like it how it is. It could also read clap of thunder or thunderclap.
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And now I look in the previous chapter too (you've written lighting rather than lightning to be clear)
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Mistake is continued in further paragraphs
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"the dark red lighting clouds"? Making it sound like mood lighting, maybe it should say lightning
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I wonder how they'll choose, I can't imagine many would choose to leave the main sect that offers better cultivation prospects.
Thinking about this, Elder Song felt determined to quickly get the Half Spirit Race fully settled down so he could send some of their Nascent Soul Realm Experts out as elders to manage some of the branches under the Star Shattering Sect.
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