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3 years ago
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well i cant help but imagine their victory and then boom a worm crashes the place.

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3 years ago
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it's okay to take breaks from writing this story and concentrate on your own body and mind. or concentrate on your other stories or do something else thats caught your attention. ouch for the family confrotation thats brewing up in this chapter. but are we going to get a glimpse on why her brother chose the problematik side or just a hint to something else.

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3 years ago
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their dialog about the gods makes me wonder if they are sleeping some where or are sealed in their domains and cant get out whitout a key.

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3 years ago
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huh wonder if Sumeng ever mer her in that other timeline.

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3 years ago
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makes me wonder if Zhangs mother was conected to the demon side i some way or if it was them that killed here.

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3 years ago
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i think the conversation betwen them made Zhang realise that a decision is going to happen for him in the future about staying or going in the world he is in.

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3 years ago
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wondering in what way Sumeng sems diferent since it's hard to know as the reader.

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3 years ago
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Wondering if the ones that go after the Sun scroll just ger trapped in their counterpart when they lose hope of trying to change things.

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3 years ago
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its just so sad to read about their ending and realise that the other Yuan yearned for Sumeng in many ways.

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3 years ago
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Yuan be strong and try to have a conversation with Sumeng when this is over.