hi i just finished reading your hxh fanfic it was really good and i hope you don't drop it :(
hmm I admit I'm a bit too much. just pissed off before... please protect our holy goddess from that lustful gaze and keep our goddess away from male men. sigh i feel so close to mc as if she is my wife
Honestly author, why don't you make our mc arrested and raped? very frustrating to see mc dressed like a b*tch and being stared at with lustful eyes by people. You know it's a bit unique because the mc we have is a woman not a man so we feel like we have a feeling of "owning" our mc. So I'm very upset. But for the story I can enjoy it that's why I don't give you 1 star even though I hate you
To be honest, this novel is cliché but unique at the same time, I love it. Keep it up, just make this novel of higher quality than the wuxia generic in general. like reducing the "courting death" conversation of arrogant people everywhere, which I know is not much in this novel and that's one of the reasons Chinese novels are so annoying you know so much "courting death" and arogant people. just keep the quality of the story and keep the speed of updating, I'm sure this novel will boom soon if this novel has many chapters.
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so far too many sentences in 1 dialogue. it's like a person who says many things in 1 breath. I think the author can cover it with inner conversation (monologue) and can also explain things through other ways besides conversation.
I mean there are countless players there. and also every day on the forum there will be thousands to tens of thousands of posts per time. And what do I mean by coincidence? Everyone who has become Mc's enemy has seen the posts on the forums where there are a lot of posts there. this is not just 1 person but more than 1 person what if this is not a coincidence (?). of course posts can be listed in status (Hot / trending) so that many people can see. but at that time he was not very famous and from the many posts they could find him all at once. what is the probability of this happening in the real world? this is why i say "coincidence"
It's been a few months since the author was active in updating. I'm just wondering how many chapters there will be if the author keeps updating actively. sighh i hope when you come back you give lots of chapters to us who have saved a lot of money for your novel.
this is really good, has really amazing potential, you know hxh's original work probably won't reach the end (because of the mangaka's condition) so this becomes another way to satisfy the desires of us hxh fans. I love really love this bro good job!. btw why did you stop updating this story?