They helped add some dimensionality, though a couple times they felt a bit distant, as if they weren't fully connected. I'm not sure why I felt this way, I think the pacing felt different during those times; is what I think. I approve of this use of multiple PoVs
4. Different. Comment.
Steven Universe: Broken Peridot.
TV · Frowfy
The bittersweetness along with accuracy in how quickly relations can develop and change had it feeling rather grounded. It was an enjoyable. The stubborn brightness that shows nestled beneath/inbetween darkness/shadow, Bittersweet.
4. Different. Comment.
Steven Universe: Broken Peridot.
TV · Frowfy
They feel right enough, I didn't have any moments of discordance to break me away from the characters and story.
1. The characters seem human to me.
Steven Universe: Broken Peridot.
TV · Frowfy
They're simple-minded, their logic is simple and shifts by their environment. Most characters i read with these traits I find insufferable, not this one, this one feels justified and valid, a sign of proper writing I'd think. They're written fine even if I personally disagree with such characters, It's interesting within this narrative they're placed in, they fit.
3. Different. Comment.
Steven Universe: Broken Peridot.
TV · Frowfy
+1
1. I watched the original "Steven Universe".
Steven Universe: Broken Peridot.
TV · Frowfy
I felt it obvious that the young master aimed to kill him, he is supposedly a decrepit elderly man on the edge of his lifespan, and it could be easily explained away if they even cared to explain why they killed this old fisherman.
It doesn't follow plot, it's quite a nice fic.
|AN- I will no longer be using "-" at the end of sentences, I believe it should be a unique thing to the maker of Ringmaker, and I want to shorten my paragraphs and the "-" only suits the longer type ones..|
[MHA: The Ice King]
Anime & Comics · Lox_Of_Sins
Very good. Very very good. The characterization of everyone is great, the general pacing and flow is great, there is much good reason in how things happen and why, good thought. Gud Writing.
No
"Unlikely," said the peculiar woman, waving away the display and leaning across her somewhat messy desk as she revealed, "The humans of your world are coded to willfully disregard the possibility that all your actions are being observed and judged. Most of you acknowledge the existence of a higher power, but if you structured your existence within the bounds of such knowledge, you wouldn't have the illusion of freedom necessary to ere and develop wisdom."
Not a Mob: Psycho
Anime & Comics · Einlion
I'll keep reading to see what tasty interactions come in to being
1. This story is still good, I'm curious for the next volumes.
Steven Universe: Broken Peridot.
TV · Frowfy