It doesn't follow plot, it's quite a nice fic.
|AN- I will no longer be using "-" at the end of sentences, I believe it should be a unique thing to the maker of Ringmaker, and I want to shorten my paragraphs and the "-" only suits the longer type ones..|
[MHA: The Ice King]
Anime & Comics · Lox_Of_Sins
Very good. Very very good. The characterization of everyone is great, the general pacing and flow is great, there is much good reason in how things happen and why, good thought. Gud Writing.
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"Unlikely," said the peculiar woman, waving away the display and leaning across her somewhat messy desk as she revealed, "The humans of your world are coded to willfully disregard the possibility that all your actions are being observed and judged. Most of you acknowledge the existence of a higher power, but if you structured your existence within the bounds of such knowledge, you wouldn't have the illusion of freedom necessary to ere and develop wisdom."
Not a Mob: Psycho
Anime & Comics · Einlion
It could be nice as an omake thing. careful with crossovers because their inclusion "can" change the general atmosphere of everything, potentially harming the story.
A/N: Should we do a crossover with Bleach? It seems fun to write, that's why I asked.
Sasuke: Requiem
Anime & Comics · Zennin
There's quite a few typos, i reccomend proofreading. and the characters seem a little flat right at the get-go.
Este libro ha sido eliminado.
MC's intelligence was evidently never directed inwards.
I felt it obvious that the young master aimed to kill him, he is supposedly a decrepit elderly man on the edge of his lifespan, and it could be easily explained away if they even cared to explain why they killed this old fisherman.
Cultivation: When you take things to the extreme
Eastern · Forget to wear a vest