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The previous chapter for me was the best in my opinion the characters expressed themselves well and their conversations didn't seem out of place the bit of comedy with the clerk was good too

See her join the asta don't get his Grimorio but if she joins you make the asta mana by taking advantage of the mana potion

I just hope that you don't add her so that something bad happens with her so that Mc gets more involved with the characters

The platform is back to normal now you can read

They ruined the web novel for those who use a translator it's not even possible to read it would be good to post it on another site and then let the readers know

They ruined the web novel for those who use a translator it's not even possible to read it would be good to post it on another site and then let the readers know

Man I'm still disappointed when a story goes well and in 1 or 2 chapters it spoils before the mc leaves the house it was going well it seems like the demon slayer fanfic is not for me

man I'm reading this fanfic on the same site from two different accounts after it was rewritten this other person or author started posting so the other account has about 42 chapters and from what I saw the story and myself I don't know if the author and the same or different people

Man if you don't know how to put romance in the story it's better not even to have it actually before these chapters it was going well

The protagonist practically revealed his identity he shouldn't go back to the navy since the world government is going after him and if they don't find out it was him and don't go after him it's illogical this fanfic

Até antes Even before Mc talked about Harem it was honestly good then it was like the other random fanfics that the characters love the protagonists fast and for no reason

You should separate the characters' lines everything together gets very confusing

This chapter is old but I agree every time I read it it seems like I'm getting dumber

The only bad thing about this fanfic is that the chapters are very time consuming, the rest is Incredible

Honestly this is one of the best DXD Fanfics I've ever seen, it would be a shame if you dropped it

Dude it doesn't look like it's going in a good direction this fanfic is going too fast

Finalmente

It wouldn't be good after all he just left with the problem with Gabriel it would just be another problem

you are changing the original so much that you have to be careful not to spoil it