we can compromise on two lol, the show dont tell is fine its valid criticism
Alaric's Father, Gunnar, wasn't great with talking, and really only let out his emotions on small occasions. He was a spearman on the hunting team, so their family had one of the bigger houses in the village.
The Slime Sovereign
Fantasy · Reawakening
I read because reading is fun and to be enjoyed, immersion is great, having fun reading a bad novel(not this one its fine ) is also fun, but pointing out flaws doesnt have to mean being disrespectful, and before you even try to say it wasnt you have Three comments to prove it
Alaric's Father, Gunnar, wasn't great with talking, and really only let out his emotions on small occasions. He was a spearman on the hunting team, so their family had one of the bigger houses in the village.
The Slime Sovereign
Fantasy · Reawakening
i normally don't reply to dumb comments but seriously dude? at the very least if your gonna complain do it in one comment
Alaric's Father, Gunnar, wasn't great with talking, and really only let out his emotions on small occasions. He was a spearman on the hunting team, so their family had one of the bigger houses in the village.
The Slime Sovereign
Fantasy · Reawakening
considering he only has 1 talent mark 2 scenarios are happening either they take longer to make new ones each time(unlikely if the first couples days mean anything), or he hass been and its simply unlikely he will find anyone better, or I guess he has a max of 1 talent mark at a time, but he would jave quickly moved into the other two scenarios if that was the case
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The Human Giant
Fantasy · Mr_Palados
like he said easy prey
"Crack!" sound of cracking wood came from his right sight. Luckily for him, it was in the opposite direction of the wind. He sniffed and his dragon mouth opened in a terrifying grin, 'It's a herbivore, that means easy prey.'. For some reason, he could easily distinguish between different smells even though he had never before smelt them.
Last Egg: Reincarnated as a Dragon in a Game
Fantasy · AnonymUser
that is the best changing of the quote i have ever seen
'Is this limit of my imagination?'
Last Egg: Reincarnated as a Dragon in a Game
Fantasy · AnonymUser
that cake tho
It turned out that the Grand Moon Sect's Nascent Soul Grandmaster was celebrating his thousand-year-old birthday.
I Turn Out to Be a Grand Master
Eastern · Little Brother Langya
shinra tensei!
"Vaccum," a voice emanates in the heart of the sea of fur.
A Gamer Awakens After 2000 Years
Fantasy · Katran5665
it doesnt apply to me because i say so lol
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Invincible Colorless Butler
Fantasy · Nzr150cc
Your fine not many people are actually gonna get angry from some comments online lol, regardless have a good day
Alaric's Father, Gunnar, wasn't great with talking, and really only let out his emotions on small occasions. He was a spearman on the hunting team, so their family had one of the bigger houses in the village.
The Slime Sovereign
Fantasy · Reawakening