Just don't stop writing
Chapter 1 A good start is waiting for you
Anyway.. you are doing a good job and don't care about the negative comments
good writing.. but I find that you have a little change in the personalities of this one, which I did not like. I hope he focuses on upgrading his strength rather than developing relationships.
I don't really understand how you say he's arrogant and cowardly???? Where is he arrogant where is he coward??? ...and about it being weak...my friend, the starting point is always from zero, otherwise I wouldn't bother writing...and also 5 wishes that whoever decides what they will be....Finally, you say that nothing has been achieved!!! I think we are only at the beginning of the story. Why are you in such a hurry? Otherwise, you would have made him wish from the start for super strength without training..... Really disappointing your comment if you don't like saying where is the problem just so I can fix it after all I'm a newbie or don't waste your precious time with it reading it .... Thanks
After seeing that some wanted me to finish the story, I will come back in a week and see if it was worth it. And I'm sorry again, I'm a newbie in the world of writing
Strength of the Hell-Crushing Godmammoth cultivation technique from the Sage Monarch novel. to clarify
Soul: The world I want is Naruto and I wish to be Naruto at 11 years old. My first wish is a cultivation technique from the year sage owner Strength of the Hell-Crushing Godmammoth.
Naruto immortel
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TDG nice
Dimensional Chat System [A Cultivation Journey]
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