Webnovel Author: Draconis0kelly - Fanfic&Novel Collection

honest review, PLEASE READ some spoiler but kept to a minimum so you can enjoy the story. first, let's break down the writing. while Grammer and spelling issues exist, it's minimal and has no impact on readability. The pov and characters are well designed, the plot is fairly solid though may not seem so in the beginning. over the course of the story many advanced universe concepts are brought about discussing about how everything works including systems and all fit into the designed universe framework without contradicting each other. I'd say the story gets better the farther into it you get. some conflicts do seem a touch forced but I also expected them to occur at some point. one of the better reads I have and I frequent it when I'm tired of other series like it's my comfort food

so I snapped this one up because I have been looking for a reincarnated space monster book and this one looked interesting. I'll be honest most of the negative I have to say about the book comes from the harem part that I missed before reading it so with that said. main gripe: too much sex<I know harem novel> I feel like five out of 8 chapters is sex or purely sex related. the sex scenes are done well they just seem to carry on longer than necessary. I prefer to read a great story with a few well placed sex scenes as opposed to sex with a touch of story. the first is like watching a r rated movie where the latter is watching a role play porn. no offense. world building and civilization backgrounds are great. characters are well written. very few grammatical errors. and an enthralling story line. again my only major issue is it seems overloaded with sex as though from the mind and libido of a late teenager.

I agree bring back this man's book or suffer the spam

my brother descendant of the gods, I praise your love of that book so much that I will give you a thumbs up every time I see you. May your dreams come true 👍

this story goes through a moderate though it feel long build up that leads to am explosion of conflict battle schemes being unleashed chaos reigning until the resolution to go back to a slow buildup. think about the original story listed at the beginning. the major eruptions happen along the major disasters. every plan scheme and conflict revolves around them. what happens in between is characters developing there resources and strength leading up to the chaos. rinse repeat. a lot of the slow parts matter to the how things get resolved.