RedBeard73

Biggest problem is just how cringy and badly written the MC is. He’s supposed to be an 80 year old scholar yet acts like a stupid kid, is dumb as hell, and then goes back and then we get the emotions bullshit where he gets mad and doesn’t even know why he’s mad, then he says he’s not afraid of Zeus while he stands there petrified waiting for his death. The last straw was the fact that he somehow beat Zeus because his Bident protected him and essentially beat Zues by itself despite the fact that Zeus’s Bolt is supposed to be more powerful, and even if it isn’t it shouldn’t in any way be able to beat Zues. The plot armor is overwhelmingly bad

Author reposts the same chapter for over 30 chapters to try and seem like they are posting regularly while scamming people out of their coins. Which is directly against Webnovels rules by the way.

The grammar isn’t too bad, it’s not broken English or anything, but the writing style and the way the characters talk is so cringy I couldn’t focus much on the story and eventually quit at chapter 20.

It’s not good, grammar is abysmal, and the author can’t even get the mythologies right. It might get better later on, but 40 chapters in it still hasn’t improved, and even if does improve grammatically, the world building has been so bad that it ruins the rest of the story.

Doesn’t lead into anything in a creative way, just slaps the MC with the most OP abilities from different anime, rattling off all of his abilities at once, didn’t even try anything clever

Story itself isn’t that bad (isn’t great), but the grammar and writing quality is so horrible, There is constantly missing words in sentences, words in the wrong order, misspelt words, and sentences that make no sense. If you can’t stand really bad English don’t read this.

This story is just a complete rip off of “Esper Harem in The Apocalypse” so if you like this then just read that, as there are more chapters and is far more fleshed out while this jumps around the place. This is like a shitty abridged version of the original.