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Hello, thanks for the update. In my opinion you should try to restart the series, because your main character is too strong and your world lacks consistency. Your main character needs some motivation, like does he wants to do something? like ideals, dream, to protect his new life? Your world needs a setting, how will gods gain power? are they natural spirits (manifestation of natural elements and powered by world) or spirits empowered by faith (do they gain power by normal day-by-day acts or needs real devotion) or are they just really strong entities with immortality on top or they are real Gods and limited by their concepts. The magic system is kinda strange, usually there are hard (numbered) magic system and soft (fantastic) magic systems and sometimes both. Usually there is magic based around manipulation of mana and causes scientific fenomenen through mana or real magic that can't be explained and breaks the normal rules (the magic is not understood or only few people can do it (because the nature of magic? or rule?)). What are your MC strength? are they mortal? Do they have greater power, but lower stamina? try to power budget this.

Thanks for the update, life goes on! If you lose interest, atleast post a summary. Someone might flesh it out.

Or they Used science to make penis and started to Fuck?

I do believe that all vampires have a human heart, Quinn and Arthur have some ideals that cares a lot about humans. Vampires are more beast like compared to humans (they have a stone to empower themselves) and this makes them a diffrent species I think. Still, humanity is hard to qualify, sometimes leaders must be a villain in some eyes to be the hero for their people.

He is still incredible young compared to the other leaders, who had some education and tips from the previous leader. This makes Quinn kinda unreliable for now.

They experienced some trouble when using the black teleporter, "it seems that its very malfunctioned and shredded most people when teleporting. This caused nearly everyone to die, I was lucky to survive the teleportation but most of the men were shredded and died due injuries. The black teleporter brought us to earth... " This explains a lot, since they can say that the black teleporter is a trap teleporter made by the terrorist group.

Will Borden ever recover? I wanna know more about his lifestyle, like eating and how much does he sleep compared to humans and what does he do in his free time?

Depending on their personality we can get flesheaters, zombies, demons, succubus and spiritual entities. Or vanilla vampires. It's kinda like a d20 roll xD

It could be that borden need to eat to Power his third level. he did not eat for a few days, while outperforming everyone.

The stories of king Arthur and the round table might not be accurate after hundreds of years.

They can actually curse someone to become a halfling (a ritual that can turn him partially and then fully when he drink more vampire blood first). I don't think that they actually bite him. The first leaders might have used kind of energy technique like Qi to transfer some energy to corrupt him.

The people are born with a set amount of mc and be increased up to a certain Limit.

I think he is kinda lucky, the Qi is hard to defend and seems to attack the inside of a vampire body. and the shadow power is kinda super anoying to fight against, slowing and pretty much everywhere. Quinn has the best skill set against vampires that attack close, if he fought against thirtheen leader with a puppet he would die. We forgot that the 13th true power is puppetting and not direct attack with strings.

I think it just devourer the shadow of target. This has a massive impact on the vampire, they are truly vulnerable against the sun (like insta dust by sun light) and add the shadow to his own. This is actually lore friendly vampire power, vampire take the souls (shadow) to gain more power.

He does release more than 20 of them in a week. Like 3 chapters each day?

She could load a gun with healing bullets