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still reading... waiting for more

ch 96 What Is God?

I'll Be The Hero That I Want To Be

Fantasy · FalseFace

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I am at chapter 39, and so far, I like the concept but do wish the writing was more fluent. it has the feel of direct translation with no polish. so. writer do not give up on this. I look forward to read more.

Illicit Relationship in Magic world

Fantasy · NITIN_ZARCs

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good chapter but could you please correct the he and she. they break up the read

ch 32 chapter 32: "We're family"

I was reborn as the 3rd prince

Fantasy · Terlik

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I thank you for another great chapter

ch 242 Ancient Sentinel of The Moon

The Harvester

Fantasy · AhraManyu

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I ask because I started writing a story and need pointers

ch 150 New Subscribers

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Fantasy · _oinkchan

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Thank you for the chapter. I really like your story so far, but I must ask how do you do it?

ch 150 New Subscribers

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Fantasy · _oinkchan

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Thank you for the chapter. I really enjoy your writing. How do you do it thought?

ch 162 Chapter One Hundred and Sixty-Two: How to Proceed

Ero Skill Tree

Fantasy · ohhdearme

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I am sorry that the chapters are to short I aim for 1k words each chapter .

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I thank you for the answer . I did add it but I am not going to go over board in its use. I don't want a stupid or lazy MC so it is there to enhance his body only

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Well to be honest I read alot if the book once before and liked it and now that I have re-read all 140 chapters that have been released I still like it but some things that got left out to me helped the story more then hindered it. but over all a good read. Keep the Chapters coming.

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Fantasy · _oinkchan

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I know it can be hard to not take to hart what haters say but please I beg you don't let them destroy your story

ch 38 Teaching the kitten, how to say meow.**

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Fantasy · _oinkchan

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so far I enjoy your novel and hope for more chapters. Do not give up and have faith in yourself.

ch 32 Chapter 32 - Erotic Bath (R-18)

A Lewd Story

Fantasy · Draky_Vampire

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This book shows great thought being put into it. I hope the writer will keep up there creation. The biggest draw back is the gender changes on Characters. Like Kin and Gin are they both boys or is one a boy and the other Girl since one is from an Emperor fungi and the other is an Empress fungi? Please if it not to much extra work can we keep it straight on all Characters?

Seven Sins Demon Fox

Fantasy · LorienRenard

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thank you so much for your wonderful work

ch 139 It's Normal

The Harvester

Fantasy · AhraManyu

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I have a thought about somethings. please double check genders when writing. it is simple mistake made by many but it might help in the future.

ch 29 Side Story 3 : Origin of Angela

Handsome enough to have a harem even if MC don't want it.

Fantasy · NxtDoorDuDE

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this is a great story keep up the good work

ch 14 Chapter 4-3: Distracting Ourselves to Cope

Innocent Devil's Harem

Fantasy · KaizerWolf

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ok... it may have taken me 4 days but I am all caught up and in need of more chapters. Thank you for all that you have written so far. I look forward to more.

ch 69 Last Hurdle