hamarmuky

hamarmuky

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2019-01-08 Se unió Nigeria
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hamarmuky
hamarmuky
4 hours ago
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sorry I am not one to say as I haven't even read it yet but I can stomach the fact that there are two user of the Six Eyes. it just doesn't follow the law of Jjk that says only one user can exist at a time. please don't take this too literal am just pointing it out.

hamarmuky
hamarmuky
4 hours ago
Posted

A good enough story. But it feels a bit too force some times. Like why did you make him transform into an Anodite when there were other aliens that could have easily dealt with the situation. Why make humongous tank all those blast when you could have had Diamond head do it. I understand that there some things that are need for the story to move forward but i personally feel like you are nerfing humongous, he probably could have taken on abomination by him self (at least the MCU version in the movie) But other than that it's a good read.

hamarmuky
hamarmuky
1 years ago
Replied to Omega989

Sorry for a long delay. I had writer's block and also just graduated. it will change continue soon.

hamarmuky
hamarmuky
1 years ago
Posted

It is an interesting idea. But I don't get the point as to why he is the Black Flash. I only read chapter 8 and from what I have read any of the Flashes could have fit in the story. Also, it doesn't make sense how easily he is found by Nick and becomes an Avenger. I am not going to say it is bad in general, but I think some things should be done differently. 1. The Mc should be older and independent. That way he wouldn't have to explain to people when he is away with the Avengers on missions. 2. Give him some time to get used to his powers. Or at least make it so that he has some professionals fight experience. 3. Make it so that he has been avoiding shield for some time before Nick finds him. These are just my opinions.

hamarmuky
hamarmuky
1 years ago
Posted

Too much harem is not good. I got turned off just from the synopsis as they are no guys involved. I'm a big fan of the harem genre but not like this.

hamarmuky
hamarmuky
1 years ago
Commented

Thanks for the update. love the story.

hamarmuky
hamarmuky
2 years ago
Commented

i really want to see how he compares with his Demon kking mode

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hamarmuky
hamarmuky
2 years ago
Replied to Sheen_escapee

No

hamarmuky
hamarmuky
3 years ago
Replied to GoldZero

I based him off Yoriichi

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