Enjoying the read so far, people have complained about it being slow but personally i like the pacing. There are a few words every now and then that don't fit, if I get time I may go back and add comments. Otherwise if you're looking for a good read, i cannot recommend this enough
loving this so far
*Esteemed
"A minimum of courtesy to our estimated guest."
Fantasy · LazyBarbarian
The poor king is going to be so surpised
A one of a kind story, highly worth the read!Unique premise and compelling narrative lends give you a lot to bite your teeth into, cannot recommend this enough. I secretly think the author is a cultivator
The story is great so far, though I would like a little more regarding the poor necromancer. I have a problem with the author using the word testemant way too often and they often mistake gun for spear but otherwise an enjoyable read
please make that meticulously mashed materials in a mortar just for the alliteration
The man was engrossed in his work at a table adorned with bottles of different hues. Despite his white hair on the verge of baldness, he remained undisturbed as he meticulously mashed ingredients in a mortar, focused on his experiment.
Eastern · Kiverance
it's a kitchen staple, not an ingredient imolike oil and salt
He added a large spoonful of crystal sugar and a small amount of water into the pot, stirring it slowly with the spatula in a constant direction.
Urban · Book shortage forced to write a book
I assume this is meant to be 170C, at 70 you wouldn't even get a sizzle
When the oil reached 70 degrees Celsius, he unfolded the slices of pork and slipped them into the pot.
Urban · Book shortage forced to write a book
just wanted to point out you spell it djin here and djinn elsewhere!
Transmigrating as an Extra Third-Rate Villain
Fantasy · avbutt