Oh btw, about the title of the story - It's "Reborn", not "Reborned"
bro straight up died 💀
Then, like the final scene of a play, an explosion occurred, destroying not only Xiangju's soul realm but his entire body as well.
Tales of Demons and Gods - Reborn as Zhu Xiangju
Anime & Comics · Rogoba
Thank you for being so receptive to my feedback :D
can you just put quotation marks when a character is speaking? It's difficult to tell when they're speaking because you sometimes do -this- to indicate it and -this. to indicate it. Just do "this" for speech and 'this' for thoughts. It makes it so much easier.
NONONOOONONNNOONO PLEASE KEEP IT AS GOKUXCHICHI AND 18XKRILLIN PLEEEEEASE NO MULTI FOR ONCE
harem and lemons is terrible
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I was Reincarnated as Krillin? Oh boy.
Anime & Comics · Silverfang
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"That's what you're doing it for, isn't it?" Gohan asked smiling before walking out of that room. Cheeli just puffed out her cheeks in annoyance.
I'm Gohan!
Anime & Comics · LordPhenex026
If we're a year into what would have been the three years timeskip, shouldn't Gohan be 8? Because I think I remember him being 11 when he fights Cell (unless I am mistaken). My thinking is that he is 7 when trunks arrives, then add 3 years, plus the one year in the time chamber. Again, perhaps I'm not remembering it correctly.
From what I could tell, Gohan and Trunks still hadn't noticed that I had arrived. They both were leaps and bounds ahead of what they were last year. Trunks had gotten so powerful that I was certain that he could take on the androids of his time without a problem while the now 7-year-old Gohan had somehow managed to keep at his pace.
I’m Trunks
Anime & Comics · Hrblackwater
Yo author, I think it'd actually be pretty nice if you gave Monoma a younger brother, that's not normally done nowadays. It'd be a change of pace, yeah?
Shibasaki wasn't about to listen, and she really was open to the idea of giving Neito a sibling.
MHA: Carbon Copy
Anime & Comics · ImagineMaker
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original Dbz: A Human's Journey
A man, reincarnated, and forced to live through Dragonball, and become strong enough to shake the universe. This is his journey. Making stories is weird. Not gonna post often, if at all. Plus, I don't even have a story planned so sorry if there are lotsa feckin plotholes. Don't expect anything too good and don't ask for more in the comments, as it'll probably stress me out and make me less likely to write another chapter. Although, feel free to comment your opinions. Also, Dragonball, Dragonball Z, GT, and Super are not owned by me, and I take no credit for it.3 Chs 29 Colecciones
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DBZ: Rise of The Humans
Guy gets reborn in Dragonball with three wishes.3 Chs 83 Colecciones
bro's fr being a creep with that much confidence. tryna surpass diddy type sh
I took this time to keep looking at Xiao Ning'er; everything about her seemed perfect, almost as if she were crafted like a porcelain doll. Her fiery red hair was so striking that it was surprising no one else was looking at her besides me.
Tales of Demons and Gods - Reborn as Zhu Xiangju
Anime & Comics · Rogoba