As shameless as it is, Author review yeah yeah. I'm a novice writer so pardon my blunders. Just give me your open-minded opinion and advice for my continuous self-improvement. Thank you.
I have read some web novels about the MC being inhuman(another race apart from being human). However, personally, this beats all I've read because of the amount of cuteness in it. I hope the author doesn't lose his/her spice though.
You are perfectly normal
You don't say
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Such a good novel dropped, sigh
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Seriously tired of all these Mc's that claim to be heartless but yet do otherwise and philander
You think so?
"Big sis what should we do?, when Robert gets his clutches on us it's over" with tears in her eyes the sixteen-year-old sobbed and wailed in the embrace of her senior sister, of course, Susan knew girls were as good as rags when they fell into his clutches and made a self-inflicted injury just to disfigure her looks but the bastard had 'holy water' he used to 'renew' what was lost including virginity. Looking at the desperate look on her little sister Anita's face she felt helpless, she was always calm and collected but in this situation, she could barely hold onto the tiny probability that he could release them. Footsteps were approaching their cell and with each step, the person took they felt doom creeping closer. 'clank! clank!' "You two the young master requests your presence in his chambers" the guard with a stern tone implored the two girls. "Young master they are here". 'Robert' with his squinted eyes examined the girls before ordering the guard out of his chambers. As soon as the guard left his chambers the older sister standing close to the table picked a silverware and was about to attack 'Robert' although her stats were not impressive they should have been at least higher than 'Robert' but the status quo had changed this was not the same Robert she knew of, Immediately she moved 'Robert' parried her attack with a punch to her ribcage and used the fountain pen on his desk to slightly graze her neck while hugging her from behind. "You are quite the feisty one eh?". 'I Failed, I rather commit suicide with my little sister than let this dog harass us any further.' Just when she was having second thoughts on her next line of action. "DEVOUR!" 'I feel so light, no Sara' and then she fell unconscious. 'Big sis?!, what did you do to my little sister?, don't come closer' Her pleading fell on deaf ears and she heard "DEVOUR!" before falling unconscious.
CALL OF HADES
Fantasy · Quickjade