After so many days .... u write this chapter ...!!!
too much stretching on same kind of topics.... last 4/5 chapter are kind of same .... Sorry but I have to say because I like the concept of your fanfic....
it 300 thousands not 30 thousands .... author making same mistake again and again 😔😔
no
I am starting to hate the MC ...... I don't know why
Use single name for every single character ... it is confusing to identify the character.
"Yes, sweetie!" Sarah answered absentmindedly, her mind racing as she sat down and forced a smile at the young man, "Of course! How are you and your friends holding up?"
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why not MC aged ..... he always 17 years old ... time pass but he still 16/17 ...
Having children earns benefit, start competing for dominance in the world by marrying a wife
Eastern · Summer fades into autumn.