Arcapollo

unfortunately dropping here, I loved the concept, but a lot of what I liked has pretty much gotten pushed back or just forgotten about. I'll just list some gripes I have 1. minions in general got completely yeeted out basically like we learn that when they level they gain equipment but you can equip them with other equipment apparently idk about there equipment at all or thier size or if there are physical changes on level up etc levels haven't been mentioned for a while but +1 stone +1 stone etc don't need to add the full text on levels each time either just the ones we don't know about, and bro refuses any boost for them so far or actually upgrading them in any real way, just seemed to start solid then broke apart. I have no idea what the advanced warrior minion even has/does, don't even know the utilities even those should be some of the best that is where the enchanting should have come from I got more but I think I've ranted enough on this one. 2. why is the mc sword obsessed? he just went. "ooo demon sword 0.0, yay.". but does he know what it would do? gamble days worth of work that could have been used to build defenses or even better minions in my opinion I think him wanting the sword is brain dead not trying to be rude but if he has the sword and 1v1 someone with a combat system he should get basicaly stomped easily especially because he dosent understand that armor is good no armor you die to anything basicaly. and even if minions are brought in I'd feel like they would be way too weak to make an actual difference but since they seem to be in novel to be "as strong as plot needs them to be" kind of setup 3. the mc himself, I don't mind if he is a psychopath or anything else but it's less psycho but more empty, along with most of the characters act hollow with the lack of emotion/description. just there for plot he doesn't seem calculating or manipulative or atleast good at them as he dosent seem to know how to deal with people so far all he just does is demand and lie, which is a horrible way to manipulate as far as I know. but I believe that's mainly my opinion. 4. lack of plot/information = no plot holes. not sure if it's intentional or just slipped through cracks but like I was talking about the minions lacking information thier in my opinion has a lack of information on alot of things like water supply, does he equip minions, how to gain exp, etc. though I do like how the author seems active in the community which normally shows they care about thier work I also liked the concept of the minions. I probably should have put this in the reviews lol i might but I just started writing ✍️ and now running out of rant steam but I hope author continues thier works and have a good life and enjoys thier stories they tell. and if author decides to rewrite this story lmk, until then bye bye 👋.