Good chapter
Since you are in doubt I would like to give some proposals, first to establish my reasoning and second since I want to read this if you decide to use it, I just hope you find your rhythm. A world that occurs to me and taking the Naruto franchise as a reference would be the following: the world has 9 beasts and their spawn invade the world, the kingdoms are united and each one put an outpost of warriors in the territories of these beasts to prevent their expansion. Although the world does not have space means, they know other planets since from time to time a ship lands (like on Goku's land) the power of those in this world is a fighting style (I was inspired by hand movements) focused in postures. By placing themselves in a posture they can circulate ki so that one posture makes them stronger, another faster, lighter, harder, more flexible, etc. Normal warriors can master about 3 fighting postures and the best can combine several that allow them to flow in a combat in an eratic and different way, changing according to need. The protagonist could learn that combat style.
Follow route 1, the one you had thought of first. Although it may seem like a good way to make crossovers since you can solve some things easily in your story. It's better to just take a base and create your own scoop so later you don't have to limit yourself, one of the most complicated aspects of making crossovers is the power level and getting into it with Dragon Ball you would have to limit the potential or inflate it and then limit it. Take ideas to make it easy for you and establish your path. It's my opinion.
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Thais for the chapter
Thank's for the chapter. And welcome to back
Evangeline.
niceee!!
Very good! I like this fanfic. The story has a good rhythm although there are some scenes that are repeated in the sense that something had already happened but it happens again as if what happened before did not happen but these scenes are told and it is easy to let them pass and they do not take away from the good experience. The progression of the character is quite good, it does not go out of context and the way of thinking and acting of the protagonist is quite sensible with few errors of judgment but without the script or the plot helping her, although the reincarnated secondary character is Pretty bad and cartoonish? The author writes it well and always makes clear his personality, which, although not deep, is enough to not feel flat. a pretty good story to read and pass the time without much to criticize other than the translator since I can't understand French and I use Google Translate but there are paragraphs that I didn't translate that you could guess from the context but that still leave you with the I want to tear your hair out. Excluding that which has nothing to do with fanfic, it is a quite pleasant story to read that is serious and realistic but is also simple and pleasant.
Thanks for the chapter
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