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*wrote this after just 2 chapters were posted* So far it has been pretty good. The only real complaint I have is the massive amount of misspellings(??). More like using the wrong word for the sentence. Like after you write it you just use autocorrect and don't go back to reread it. Smile instead of small, fore instead of fire, and self instead of shelf just to name a few. Honestly pretty good start so far just correct the spelling. Good luck with this story(I'm not dropping). Thought this meme was relevant.

*disclaimer* only read to chapter 2 as of writing this review. Pros: 1.intersting way of adding system into the story 2.the system is nice and simple(hate overly complicated systems especially talking ones) Cons: 1.quite a few spelling mistakes (not mistakes in diction or anything like that just spelling) 2. hasn't shown the status screen just described it (you can just add it in as a picture in the comments if that makes it easier) Over all I really like it and will be reading it going forward even if the 2 cons aren't fixed/changed. Good luck with this story author. Here's a pic I like.