Ryker_Bale

Ryker_Bale

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I am the architect of futures both dark and dazzling, a storyteller spinning narratives in the undercurrent of a world where every keystroke is a step into the unknown.

2018-10-07 Se unió Global
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Ryker_Bale
4 months ago
Posted

I'm thinking of diving in back into "marlne state of mind". I dropped it due to my work but I missed writing it. I would rewrite it because the moment of loosing Pierce and an arm was weak and stupid.

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Ryker_Bale
9 months ago
Posted

The characters are well thought out, each with their own goals and flaws, making them relatable. Their interactions feel genuine and add an emotional layer to the narrative.

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Ryker_Bale
9 months ago
Posted

Keep up good work, good job, I wish I could find here few more chapters. First was cool and wanted me to dive into this novel :) I hope u will not give up!

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Ryker_Bale
9 months ago
Posted

Hey! I like it :) Keep up good work. What makes this book interesting is the effort put into building the world. I think I will look up ur novel after few weeks also!

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Ryker_Bale
9 months ago
Posted

What makes this book interesting is the effort put into building the world and developing a plot that keeps you guessing. There's a nice mix of political intrigue, ancient prophecies, and battle scenes that keeps the pace moving.

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Ryker_Bale
9 months ago
Posted

I'm fond of the concept where the main character has a conversational system by his side, making the journey more intriguing. The writing is easily digestible and perfectly descriptive. Eagerly looking forward to the next chapter's arrival.

Ryker_Bale
Ryker_Bale
9 months ago
Posted

hey there! I like it! For me ur writing is good, I'm interested what will happen to mc! Keep up good work. I didn't see any grammar mistakes and ur plot is fun.

Ryker_Bale
Ryker_Bale
9 months ago
Posted

Hello, as the architect of this narrative, I've meticulously crafted each layer to transport you into the realm of my creativity. I hope it resonates with you. I'm eager to engage in a conversation about Marlene's odyssey. So, dive in, reach out, and let's embark on this journey together. Stay tuned for what's to come.

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Ryker_Bale
9 months ago
Replied to ToufiqUlAlam

Sure, I will give a try. Give me two days to read it up.

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Ryker_Bale
9 months ago
Replied to Allen_Clay012

Thank you!

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