Kryn_Winterbourne

Kryn_Winterbourne

male LV 15

Just a wandering soul.

2018-10-02 Se unió Global
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Kryn_Winterbourne
Kryn_Winterbourne
5 days ago
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I love the fact that you’re able to put out up to 3 chapters. However I want it to be tomorrow already so that I can read the next ones.

Kryn_Winterbourne
Kryn_Winterbourne
8 days ago
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I Am Reading These To Fast!!!!!!

Kryn_Winterbourne
Kryn_Winterbourne
10 days ago
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Hope everything is going well. Can’t wait for the next chapters to come out.

Kryn_Winterbourne
Kryn_Winterbourne
1 months ago
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I’m so glad to see you back again. Last I remember was you taking care of school work and prepping for test. Hope everything went well. Can’t wait to read more of this story. Kitsune are one of my favorite creatures and this story one of, if not, the top favorite story im reading on here. Cheers.

Kryn_Winterbourne
Kryn_Winterbourne
2 months ago
Replied to Zurbluris

My first thought when I saw the misspelled word was a line from a movie called the slammin salmon. The late Micheal Clark Duncan had a character that wasn’t the smartest when it came to words and one of them was “ tell him it better be free or I’m a send him to bulivion.” Which should have been oblivion.

Kryn_Winterbourne
Kryn_Winterbourne
2 months ago
Commented

Obliterated? Typos suck, and even more so for those that don’t have English as a first language. Not criticizing, but if this helps then all the better. Everyone new to writing improves as they get feed back and more confidence when people enjoy their work. I’m enjoying this one, and wish for more than one chapter a day. Keep the good work though.

Kryn_Winterbourne
Kryn_Winterbourne
4 months ago
Replied to Kryn_Winterbourne

Also I just realized it’s a different Karl than the one on thinking of. I’m reading multiple stories at once and another one had a main character named Karl that has chapters released daily, and I got the two mixed.

Kryn_Winterbourne
Kryn_Winterbourne
4 months ago
Replied to Zurbluris

I am kind of curious, but having read up to this point, I can already take some educated guesses on what happened considering events and reasons that were going on during those chapters. That said, I also have some speculations as to what will happen on the brother that is now seemingly an undead.

Kryn_Winterbourne
Kryn_Winterbourne
4 months ago
Commented

I knew it was going to be a city from one of the “memories” Karl experienced. And when I saw the description of the sword, I first thought of the dragon he experienced firsthand of, not the dragon’s brother

Kryn_Winterbourne
Kryn_Winterbourne
4 months ago
Commented

Karl? When did he get here? Or is this a differnt one?

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