Love the story so far, but it feels kinda rushed.He strength increases dramatically every chapter, and he seems like ur typical power-hungry mc. I would like to see a little more. depth in the Mc or emotion
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+1
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Highschool DxD: I have a Dimensional Travel System
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good work
Good plot and development Great book and read
oh ok
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I like the story so far. I like progression. I have a question: Does the MC have three martial souls
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Like it so far, keep it up 👍
I like the story so far, but why is there Spanish in the middle of every chapter
Right was going to be my suggestion.Have start a branch clan in Konoha
So I read some people to propose to make the Uzumaki clan move to Konoha and I also had that idea, but I stumped on something very realistic XD The population! Honestly while I have some idea, like creating a sub Ninja village in the country of Fire or make most the Uzumaki clan dispersed in the country of fire while the other came to Konoha, but I'm not really satisfied with those ideas. So I'm humbling asking for any brighter idea on that case plz (T^T)!
Sandaime Hokage
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Storm Breathing