🙏 spell "weird" correctly 🙏
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Shadow Slave: Diaries of a Stranger in even Stranger Lands
Book&Literature · John_Doe_777
🙏 fix the spelling on "weird"
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Book&Literature · John_Doe_777
It's spelled "weird", please spell it correctly in later chapters.
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Book&Literature · John_Doe_777
when you spell "weirder" make sure to put the "e" before the "i"
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Book&Literature · John_Doe_777
Dude, author, you go between "Gabriel", "Hassan" to "Darth". Pick one please.
Boba ran his hand over his father's breastplate, trying to hold back trembling lips with his other hand. Gabriel saw that he wanted to cry again, just like when he found the body in the arena, but he was trying to hold it in. Fett removed his hand from his face, bit his lower lip, and began to undo the straps on the armor. Hassan was impressed by the boy's willpower; if he were in the same situation at that age, he would probably lie down next to his parent's corpse and wait for his own death. Even in his early years, the future bounty hunter showed his strength. Someone like Boba Fett would undoubtedly come in handy for Darth in the future.
Star Wars: Darth Hassan
Movies · Vandalizer
You meant "vehemently" not "violently".
Silver had actively helped Steven build his pokemon team. His brother had been planning to get a Lileep and Anorinth as resurrected from fossils he had found during his journey and Silver had protested the choices violently since Devon would be the one that would resurrect the pokemon, Silver had gotten his brother to trade the fossils from the ones that were already in the inventory.
Silver Stone: I Became Steven Stone's Little Brother!!!
Anime & Comics · dukeofvirtue
+1
1- Join Straw Hats
One Piece: My Wife is Nico Robin
Anime & Comics · Normal_Dude
You spelt his name "Kaiden" instead od Kieran.
his response to the action was one of the stupidest ones I've seen.
it's HE not SHE. please fix the spelling
MMA Gods
Sports · LIQN