yo author....wasting a lot of time repeating the same thing over and over. not cool bro. let's have the plot actually move forward instead of focusing on the same hamster wheel of thoughts.
yo author, love the sorry but they have been acting dumb, not strange. idk what you are pulling but I do hope you get to it sooner rather than later. cause again, not strange, just dumb. I don't see any connection to why they would be seen as strange
I hope there is a reason they are suddenly acting so dumb...like just call the vice principal....
Why is it messed up?
LOL, wondered how Mt Sinai was gonna play into this, but here we go. Mc gonna be Yahweh pretty soon here XD
yo aoki, been a fan for quite a while of your work....so I'm just wondering if you ever changed hawks name to...well, an actual name? like bro, there is no more weak an effort of naming than calling a hawk, hawk. and your work already proves you can name a bazillion different characters. just really damn jarring to see one of the main characters being referred to as its species.
Her little sister had a flair for the dramatic that the Naga Queen appreciated, even if Cara did usually act like the bigger sister.
The First Legendary Beast Master
Fantasy · Aoki_Aku
lol, not offended or anything. just couldn't track how you got there. also, I'm still taking it as not lacking in love, but I don't think he will get harem route, instead he will, once again, break the normal troupe and actually find love that is worth holding onto. I mean, idc if harem or not but still, many to choose from, only one will be chosen. ( go Selina for l.i.!)
How the F did you come to that conclusion? I just figured it meant he would not lack in the love department but would therefore have a crazy adventure department.
Someone watched the Olympics this year ;) cause that dude was for sure an assassin before quiting to rep his country XD
Look, this story was great going up to chapter 440, then from there until 518 it was ONE SINGLE RAID.... Such an abrupt and drawn out delay in moving the story forward hurts like a MFer. Like, if this is the rest of the novel it is going to SUCK. And no author, I do not care about the fancy moves and sniffing out backstabbers. Could have made this whole 80 chapter stretch into 30 chapters and it would have been fine, but you did not, and after skipping well over half of those chapters I swear I will drop if something like this happens again. Again I say, 80 whole chapters of nothing but the same space, the same people, and almost no forward progress in any way during that time. Hell, of the chapters I did read I swear 6 or 8 of them could have been AT MOST 2 if you did not drag out the conversations over and over and over and over again.
Reincarnation of the Strongest Healer
Games · Idczhen