THAT'S THE GOAL!! TO BE AT THE TOP! what's so hard for that to understand? you keep saying it's ambition, it's only an ambition if he didn't reach it but he's the MC of the story for sure he will become the strongest nen user, just because he didn't said it directly it doesn't mean he didn't have a goal. What's your dream or ambition? to be the strongest in the world. that's a goal right? if you successfully become one but if you didn't then it's only an ambition, see the simple logic?
ch 22 The Phantom Troupe
Anime & Comics · WildPolarBear
First of all, i didn't said they should be like Akatsuki, what i said is that they should have a goal instead of doing anything like in the original because the author said they should be a Troupe like? so what's the real Phantom Troupe? doing anything they like, killing innocents, for money, for everything. They lacked the ideology, they're just a group of criminals who doesn't care about what they do and the founding members are loyal to their leader, simple as that. Second, about the things you said for the incoming arcs, remember this is still 12 yrs ago prior to the Yorknew City Arc considering this is a Phantom Troupe centric fanfic the author can't just do a big timeskip because that will not make sense, so the incoming arcs like Yorknew and Chimera will be in much later part of the novel.
ch 22 The Phantom Troupe
Anime & Comics · WildPolarBear
I understand your point too but this is fanfiction, well although yours is technically a fanfiction aside from having adding an OC, what's the difference between the original story and your work? I know Troupe is Troupe if they act like Troupe but wouldn't that be repetitive? because you said they need to be Troupe, so that means you're just going to repeat what they did in the original story with just a little bit of twist that MC is part of the group and a vice leader. You know since this 12 yrs before the plot in Yorknew City, there's just so much potential in your work. This is just my personal opinion brother, i still appreciate your work keep it up!
ch 22 The Phantom Troupe
Anime & Comics · WildPolarBear
I thought this would be more interesting Phantom Troupe than the original one. Looks like they're just another group takes everything they want and want nothing taken away from them. Personally, i think this would be more interesting if they have an agenda like Akatsuki and other villain groups, probably the only thing i can expect in this story is about all killing, stealing, killing and stealing again until they reach the main plot of the OG story. Welp, each to their own i guess.
ch 22 The Phantom Troupe
Anime & Comics · WildPolarBear
oohhhhh don't give us hope....
ch 81 News.
Anime & Comics · TheXVoid
This is a Peaky Blinders fanfiction, just because he has "Bones of Death" doesn't mean the author wants to turn this into an anime where he can be Light Yagami. There's a reason why "Bones of Death" isn't being used for ridiculous things like weapons or artifacts from anime world because this is a Peaky Blinders fanfiction.
When he finished filling out all the paperwork, he raised his face. But at that moment, the muzzle of a pistol appeared in front of his face, pointed at his forehead, and a second later he heard Victor's powerful voice looking at him with absolute indifference: - "It was nice to work with you, Marcus Baker."
TV · Jasmer
Fortunately, him deciding to leave Emily for war really worked so well. I'm glad you decided to create your own mafia family which consists of former veteran soldiers (a really nice idea and it was completely reasonable). Looking forward to the reunion of the two(Emily and Victor), i expect wholesome moments about his own mafia family and i hope they will be given more exposure (like there's distinct rankings and more side characters, not like only Artie and Oscar are introduced then the rest of the members are disregarded) since Peaky Blinders wasn't all about Thomas Shelby but it was all about The Shelby family and the Peaky Blinders itself.
ch 22 Chapter 20 - We are the Mafia
TV · Jasmer
glad to hear that, i just observed because his sins was ignored because there's no monologue about him using Trask only for his talents. Thank you for reminder!
ch 90 90. Mr President, PLEASE! [BONUS]
Movies · MisterImmortal
he's kinda being a hypocrite here, trask leading him to "right path" was so forced, i love how wholesome he is and how he is clear about what's right and wrong, he even decided to drop bombs on japan just to avoid the bigger casualties possible but him deciding to think about leading trask on the "right path" is absurd, man's already doing experiments on mutants considering the robots (sentinels) were done and all those mutants who were experimented on just being ignored for the sake of having a scientist interested on x-gene. I get that trask will die but still deliberately acting like the dude is not a sinner just doesn't feel good considering how he is so pressed about making the world better.
ch 90 90. Mr President, PLEASE! [BONUS]
Movies · MisterImmortal
Average at best, so many things he did and so many things happened but the result is that it's just the same in the canon, what's the point of getting reincarnated and almost half of the story currently dedicated to his training and mastering jutsus and he can't change a damn thing in the story to makes this more interesting. Felt like the story will stay the same him being below the the OG strong characters and he will do nothing about it but hide and flaunts his fuckin careful, cowardly, and "i dont want relationships in this ninja world because it can get me killed" nature. I bet the story will go the same as the canon but we will have the MC training and training again and again and still find himself inferior of the strong OG characters, so author can have the reason to continue doing this routine again and again until this story goes from outer space. 🤷♂️
Naruto : The Wind Calamity
Fantasy · Devil_Hex